The 23-point story

[Svenskaflicka]

Right now, I have 140 points in the Survivor contest. I only need ONE more story, then I'll get 3 points for the story + a 20-points-bonus for filling ALL the categories.

If I can manage to write that story and submit it within 2 hours, I'll become 2nd in the contest, just like I was last year.

Problem is, it's Mind Control.

Hypnosis, and stuff. I have no idea what to write. To me, fucking someone who's under hypnosis would be like a cousin to necrophilia!

Help! What shall I do? Give me ideas, people!

Help, help!


HELP!








PS: HELP!

 

[Guest]

Flicka, think of it as a very distant cousin to necrophilia; after all the hypnotized person is breathing and warm.

Make it different, i.e, most stories seem about men taking advantage of women. Have the hypnotist be the woman and command full and constant erection. Then just describe what you'd love to do to a fully compliant and silent male.

Have fun. Now get off the boards and start writing.

Perdy

 

[Couture]

There's mind control and then there's MIND CONTROL. A lot of it is very much like snuff, but some of it is quite fun and sexy. It all depends on the author.

Like there was this movie where the guy was hypnotized to think that this fat chick looked like Gweneth Paltrow. That would be a mind control story. I did one where a girl was hypnotized to believe she was Supergirl.

Or what about a frigid girl who turns into a sex dynamo after going to a hypnotist to be cured. Her husband who put her up to it, likes it at first, but soon can't keep up.

 

[Svenskaflicka]

But what's the sexiness in having sex with someone who's not doing it out of his/her free will?

That would be just a form of masturbation, using the other person's genitals..?

 

[Guest]

So think of it as masturbation then, just with a warm toy that doesn't need batteries.

P.

 

[Svenskaflicka]

*turns off "Some Like It Hot" and gets to work*

 

[Boxlicker101]

Right now, I have 140 points in the Survivor contest. I only need ONE more story, then I'll get 3 points for the story + a 20-points-bonus for filling ALL the categories.

If I can manage to write that story and submit it within 2 hours, I'll become 2nd in the contest, just like I was last year.

Problem is, it's Mind Control.

Hypnosis, and stuff. I have no idea what to write. To me, fucking someone who's under hypnosis would be like a cousin to necrophilia!

Help! What shall I do? Give me ideas, people!

Help, help!


HELP!



PS: HELP!

Maybe you could make it a role-play story, with a man and a woman, or whatever, and one pretending to be hypnotized while the other orders him and her to commit certain sex acts that both enjoy. Rolw-playing a rape works for non-consent, why not for mind-control?

I'm in California right now, by the way, and it is 1:15PM, PST so you have 10 hours and 45 minutes.

 

[The_Fool]

But what's the sexiness in having sex with someone who's not doing it out of his/her free will?

That would be just a form of masturbation, using the other person's genitals..?

A lot of the MC stories set it up that the Drugs, Hypnosis, whatever are used to free a person's inhibitions. Write it as if you were taking off a mental chastity belt.



I just came up with a story line for you. Black male, well endowed has issues with erection because he is afraid that that he will hurt the woman receiving his attentions.

Female Hypnotist assists in removing his mental block and removing his clothes....

 

[Guest]

Fool, good to see you. Not quite hi-jacking this thread to wish you a Happy 2004.

smooches,

Perdita

 

[The_Fool]

Fool, good to see you. Not quite hi-jacking this thread to wish you a Happy 2004.

smooches,

Perdita

Smoooches back....

Best to you and yours in the new year...

Foolio

 

[gauchecritic]

Mind control? Piece of piss just write an ordinary story and have them as a couple. The female will always and without doubt have the man under Mind Control.

Gauche

 

[The_Fool]

Mind control? Piece of piss just write an ordinary story and have them as a couple. The female will always and without doubt have the man under Mind Control.

Gauche

*ROFLMFAO*

 

[Icingsugar]

Does a mind-control story really have to contain mind-control? I'm thinking of a story *about* mind-control instead., and some people's interreest in it.

How about this setup: A woman finds out, one way or the other, that a guy is mildly obsessed with her. So she feigns being under hypnosis, to see if he takes advantage of it. He does, and she plays along, at least for a while, before confronting him. What happens then? Oh,I guess they can always find a good excuse to get on with it like rabbits.



ps. Gauche, touché!

 

[Couture]

Mind control? Piece of piss just write an ordinary story and have them as a couple. The female will always and without doubt have the man under Mind Control.

Gauche

Post of the week

 

[Guest]

The female will always and without doubt have the man under Mind Control.

IMO this is the most self-revealing statement yet. Not a shocking revelation, only that it's public, and from one who takes such obvious care in his public persona.

Perdita

 

[Svenskaflicka]

OK, I'm mid-way through a comedy about a horny witch.

I like Fool's idea, though. I'll keep it for tomorrow. There's a Survivor Contest 2004, too, you know...

 

[Boxlicker101]

I was just wondering what happens if a story is submitted timelyh but is rejected for one reason or another. If the problem is resolved and the story is resubmitted in Jan. is it considered timely for the 2003 contest? If so, how long would a person have to fix it?

 

[Guest]

Jeezeluhweeze, Box, it's new year's eve!

Perdita

have another smooch and get un-serious

 

[Icingsugar]

Why Perdita, I think you're right. it IS new year's eve. And it's only 30 minutes away from the new year for me. So I'm off to go find a good spot to watch the fireworks.

...and call mom.
...and Lin.

Well, see ya later!



/Ice

 

[Boxlicker101]

Jeezeluhweeze, Box, it's new year's eve!

Perdita

have another smooch and get un-serious

You're right, Dita, and your lips are so enticing, I will kiss them now and at midnight. Since that is eight hours from now, for you and me, anyhow, I will probably kiss them many times between now and then.

 

[Svenskaflicka]

Watching "Dead Calm" on TV right now.

Funny, I have a friend who looks like that Billy Zane-guy.

Only my friend is much better looking.

 

[Guest]

I will probably kiss them many times between now and then.

Ah ha ha, Box. Remember to wipe your screen occasionally. My RL lips are not so easily offered.

Perdita

(smilie kisses are easy, hahaha)

 

[Boxlicker101]

Ah ha ha, Box. Remember to wipe your screen occasionally. My RL lips are not so easily offered.

Perdita

(smilie kisses are easy, hahaha)

Hi, Dita (wipes off screen) (wipes off screen again)

You might remind Flicka that she has more time than she seems to think. The deadline is midnight Pacific Standard Time, which is over seven hours from now. I mentioned this earlier but I think I am on her ignore list.

 

[Guest]

... I think I am on her ignore list.

Really? Well, I'm going to leave her alone, let her enjoy the new year (she can't catch up to Vassago anyway). Whatever did you do? You piss me off occasionally but for one poster only I forget grudges easily.

virtual smooches galore,

Perdita

 

[Boxlicker101]

Really? Well, I'm going to leave her alone, let her enjoy the new year (she can't catch up to Vassago anyway). Whatever did you do? You piss me off occasionally but for one poster only I forget grudges easily.

virtual smooches galore,

Perdita

Actually, she doesn't need to do much of anything because she hit an immunity today. She can use that for a 22 point score and still come in second. 28 is her number, and it was drawn today.

I pissed you both off on the thread about toe cleavage. I think it was that one and Flicka might hold a grudge longer. (goes to get a fresh cloth because the current one is worn out)