Thank you Mr. Onymous

[Alex De Kok]

To Mr. (I presume - I could be wrong) A. N. Onymous my thanks for your three word feedback on my little piece, Welcome to our bed, Goody-Two-Shoes.

As a result of your comment, "Your story sucks", I now feel I can hold my head up among the talent on this site. I have finally arrived!

Alex

 

[Bigdog]

Alex-

Sorry to hear your story sucks. I guess I should feel stupid now for giving it a 5. Hey, what the fuck do I know?

 

[Dolma Kalem]

Alex,

I've just read your story. Mr Anonymous did me a favour. I enjoyed it. So please thank him for me.


Best wishes

Dolma

 

[A. H. Onymous]

Okay, my first name is Antonio, Tony for short, and my initials A.H. do NOT stand for ass hole like so many of you think.

Your story sucks because you act like Carly is some kind of angel. What kind of woman asks when is it going to get hard after it’s sticking straight up? And what’s the big deal about sucking me off? It’s not like my dick would reach the back of her mouth or anything.

My lawyers won’t let me talk about the case, but I want to go on record that it was an outrageous arrest. Since when do seventeen female police officers strip a male prisoner, and then ridicule his equipment?

I am outraged, you hear, outraged!

 

[dhenshaw2]

I get it. Tony from the story. Very funny. Was I the only one that wanted to see him get his cum-uppence?

 

[Alex De Kok]

Vengeance on Tony!

Thanks for the feedback, guys and gals (and the votes!)

In the feedback I've been getting on the story, just under half have made some comment wanting to see Tony get his just rewards. The first draft of the tale actually did have more about his possible downfall, but it didn't further the Claire/Carly/Jack plot so I took it out.

I think some of the readers must have looked at my other work, too, because I've started getting more feedback on 'A Date for the Prom' as well. The sequel to 'Prom' is in first draft!

Alex