Dusty_writer
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Hello everyone !
As said above, I just published my first story.
It has a rating of 4.4 over 40ish rating as of now. To me, it sounds good, but as I lack experience I might be wrong. Feel free to correct me on that point.
It's also my first ever story I ever written in english, as it is not my main language. I tried my best to get every mistakes I could have made, but I apologies if there is still any.
Any feedback is welcome as I would love to improve. But, feedback on the dialogues and the pacing would be great as it is where I struggeld the most.
Here is the link : Wait and hope ch. 01 : The call
Thank you for your time !
As said above, I just published my first story.
It has a rating of 4.4 over 40ish rating as of now. To me, it sounds good, but as I lack experience I might be wrong. Feel free to correct me on that point.
It's also my first ever story I ever written in english, as it is not my main language. I tried my best to get every mistakes I could have made, but I apologies if there is still any.
Any feedback is welcome as I would love to improve. But, feedback on the dialogues and the pacing would be great as it is where I struggeld the most.
Here is the link : Wait and hope ch. 01 : The call
Thank you for your time !
