Spectacles
Virgin
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- Dec 6, 2012
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((This is basically: "man survives end of the world, found by new, technologically repressed society". I'm looking for a female co-writer to play one of the "savages". I'm also more than willing to hear any ideas regarding the details of this new society, as it seems only fair with my co-writer as the one playing as one of them.))
He was a man in a fish tank.
The tank itself was a cylindrical affair filled to the brim with translucent liquid that surrounded and encompassed the form within. A heavy lid, forged of an unknown metal, sealed the tank. Nothing was allowed in, not even air. Likewise, that held within, a body with the solid lines of a man, has not been without to feel even the simple pleasure of the wind on his face in a millennium or more. A mask over the lower portion of that face provided a lifeline of breathable air. The mask was all he wore; that much was apparent despite the murkiness of the liquid that otherwise concealed the details of his face and form.
Rock walls, the walls of a cave, surrounded the tank on three sides. Cave art on one wall, that of men hunting unfamiliar beasts, made the tank seem all the more out of place with its technological nature. The back of this long-forgotten cave had long ago become the place that housed its unlikely occupant. In all that time, nothing sentient has even been aware of its existence. It was something of an age long past, an age forgotten and likely to never be re-discovered. Until random chance intervened, that is.
A storm battered the cliff wall. It was not the first storm of its kind to hurl itself against the rock face, and it would not be the last. But it was the first to drive a group of hunters to seek refuge within that small and unlikely cave. Mud caked each of their sinuous bodies from head to toe, leaving even their shoulder-cropped hair slick against their scalps. They appeared savage and as one with the nature around them as they flowed into the cave's mouth like water.
If the tank's occupant could open his eyes, then the sight of these mud-caked figures with only their eyes visible in the near dark would greet his waking gaze. The language they spoke would be alien and entirely incomprehensible to his ears. But he would have understood one thing quite well. The hurled rock that arched toward the tank's glass wall needed no translating. Glass shattered. Liquid splurged out. His form fell forward.
He was dead. Dead for who knows how long, but it was clear that he stopped breathing years and years ago, if not centuries. Inquisitive eyes set in mud covered faces turned toward the cave's second occupant: a second tank that likewise held a comatose form. This body was much like the first in that he was undeniably male and devoid of a woman's curvature; this much could be seen through the translucent liquid containing him.
He was a man in a fish tank.
A second rock hurtled through the air, freeing him with the crystal tone of breaking glass. Like his predecessor, he slumped forward, apparently lifeless. Curious feet paced forward only to prod at him with questing fingertips. As one they jumped back at the sound of him taking a deep breath, his first in uncounted ages.
He laid there, his eyes yet closed, the mask yet affixed to the lower half of his face. His skin shimmered, glistening and covered with that strange liquid the tanks previously contained. His chest rose and fell with each deep breath he took, as if breathing was all his body could manage while adjusting to the shock of being plunged into the air of the outside world.
The savages padded forward again, their confidence growing. Hands seized him, lifting and carrying him to the very beginnings of the cave. The storm yet raged outside. Gingerly the hands set him down near the very center of the cave. Warily their gazes remained on him as again they began to speak and to argue in their own tongue, undoubtedly discussing his fate before he even had a chance to fully awaken.
He was a man in a fish tank.
The tank itself was a cylindrical affair filled to the brim with translucent liquid that surrounded and encompassed the form within. A heavy lid, forged of an unknown metal, sealed the tank. Nothing was allowed in, not even air. Likewise, that held within, a body with the solid lines of a man, has not been without to feel even the simple pleasure of the wind on his face in a millennium or more. A mask over the lower portion of that face provided a lifeline of breathable air. The mask was all he wore; that much was apparent despite the murkiness of the liquid that otherwise concealed the details of his face and form.
Rock walls, the walls of a cave, surrounded the tank on three sides. Cave art on one wall, that of men hunting unfamiliar beasts, made the tank seem all the more out of place with its technological nature. The back of this long-forgotten cave had long ago become the place that housed its unlikely occupant. In all that time, nothing sentient has even been aware of its existence. It was something of an age long past, an age forgotten and likely to never be re-discovered. Until random chance intervened, that is.
A storm battered the cliff wall. It was not the first storm of its kind to hurl itself against the rock face, and it would not be the last. But it was the first to drive a group of hunters to seek refuge within that small and unlikely cave. Mud caked each of their sinuous bodies from head to toe, leaving even their shoulder-cropped hair slick against their scalps. They appeared savage and as one with the nature around them as they flowed into the cave's mouth like water.
If the tank's occupant could open his eyes, then the sight of these mud-caked figures with only their eyes visible in the near dark would greet his waking gaze. The language they spoke would be alien and entirely incomprehensible to his ears. But he would have understood one thing quite well. The hurled rock that arched toward the tank's glass wall needed no translating. Glass shattered. Liquid splurged out. His form fell forward.
He was dead. Dead for who knows how long, but it was clear that he stopped breathing years and years ago, if not centuries. Inquisitive eyes set in mud covered faces turned toward the cave's second occupant: a second tank that likewise held a comatose form. This body was much like the first in that he was undeniably male and devoid of a woman's curvature; this much could be seen through the translucent liquid containing him.
He was a man in a fish tank.
A second rock hurtled through the air, freeing him with the crystal tone of breaking glass. Like his predecessor, he slumped forward, apparently lifeless. Curious feet paced forward only to prod at him with questing fingertips. As one they jumped back at the sound of him taking a deep breath, his first in uncounted ages.
He laid there, his eyes yet closed, the mask yet affixed to the lower half of his face. His skin shimmered, glistening and covered with that strange liquid the tanks previously contained. His chest rose and fell with each deep breath he took, as if breathing was all his body could manage while adjusting to the shock of being plunged into the air of the outside world.
The savages padded forward again, their confidence growing. Hands seized him, lifting and carrying him to the very beginnings of the cave. The storm yet raged outside. Gingerly the hands set him down near the very center of the cave. Warily their gazes remained on him as again they began to speak and to argue in their own tongue, undoubtedly discussing his fate before he even had a chance to fully awaken.