Superhero : Lover Man

[DirkCamacho]

This belongs in Sci-Fi Fantasy. Man acquires superhero powers as a lover. Magic saliva and mouth gives women oral orgasms. Magic cock can change size to fit the need. No refractory period, can fuck forever. Magic semen has erotic properties.

This can be a series. Origins of Loverman, how he acquires/discovers his skills. How it affects his current relationship. New lovers in various settings and combinations. What it means to a woman after being made love to by the best lover in the world. Loverman uses his powers for good, to help people in ways other than getting them off. He starts becoming known. He acquires an enemy (superpower or not? Could go either way.) Loverman continues to battle his nemesis while spreading orgasmic bliss.

Is this too silly?
Has it been done already?
I’ll try it, but omg writing a series seems like a huge undertaking.

 

[aToyEnjoyer]

Welcome to the club of idea havers! I am one who absolutely relishes in silly ideas and the Sci-Fi and Fantasy category as a whole. Finished one longer erotic story so far, and you are right, it's a huge undertaking. 30,000 words for me took about half a month of non-stop writing during my winter vacation, but I'm so happy I went through with it. Raised my confidence a ton. (Despite the last 18k word part getting falsely flagged for AI, sigh)

I think a super OP insta-orgasm man might get a bit stale if he's only getting with regular human partners. After the first few times, I'd be more interested if his partners were unique and powerful as well. Like a villain of the week type deal where he challenge a new supervillain woman each time. Not sure how vanilla you are, but it could range from women that specialize in certain techniques (Like handjob, footjob, blowjob, etc.) to more Sci-Fi and Fantasy type women like a super powered sex robot AI or a tentacle woman from the depths of the ocean.

Personally, I'd like to see him nearly drowning and succumbing to the intense pleasure they give him before just barely managing to overpower them with his own pleasure. Then get excited for what kind of woman will come next.

But take my opinion with a grain of salt, because I like wacky shit lol.

 

[DirkCamacho]

I think a super OP insta-orgasm man might get a bit stale if he's only getting with regular human partners. After the first few times, I'd be more interested if his partners were unique and powerful as well. Like a villain of the week type deal where he challenge a new supervillain woman each time. Not sure how vanilla you are, but it could range from women that specialize in certain techniques (Like handjob, footjob, blowjob, etc.) to more Sci-Fi and Fantasy type women like a super powered sex robot AI or a tentacle woman from the depths of the ocean.

Personally, I'd like to see him nearly drowning and succumbing to the intense pleasure they give him before just barely managing to overpower them with his own pleasure. Then get excited for what kind of woman will come next.

But take my opinion with a grain of salt, because I like wacky shit lol.

@aToyEnjoyer Really appreciate the creativity and feedback. This is where we might get into trouble. I am actually pretty vanilla. I only wandered into Sci Fi and Fantasy as kind of a mistake. It’s not usually my cup of tea - because I never really knew it existed. (Then I found some stories that really turned me on.) So I’m not exactly full of ideas for fantasy women, sex creatures, at this point. That world is mostly foreign to me. Either I’ll end up writing bad orc fantasies, or sex scenes that have been done a thousand times. But maybe I could get 2 or 3 chapters done and see where it goes. What’s a normal pace of chapter releases for people who write series? Do I have to write the whole megilla before publishing it?

 

[aToyEnjoyer]

I am actually pretty vanilla. I only wandered into Sci Fi and Fantasy as kind of a mistake. It’s not usually my cup of tea - because I never really knew it existed. (Then I found some stories that really turned me on.) So I’m not exactly full of ideas for fantasy women, sex creatures, at this point. That world is mostly foreign to me. Either I’ll end up writing bad orc fantasies, or sex scenes that have been done a thousand times.

In my opinion, the Loverman idea locks you out of a lot of the emotional connection and build up that many other sex scenes on Literotica focus on. I don't think you're imagining him to have a close relationship with all the women he bangs, bar one by the sound of it.

However, you do have a unique opportunity to embrace the silliness here and make something that's simultaneously amusing and hot. Keep reading more of those Sci-Fi and Fantasy series that turn you on, then take the races/creatures and ideas you like and rehash them in a more extreme and silly way.

For a random example, you could read an interesting and super hot story about a vampire that hunts down men to feed on their semen instead of blood. Take that concept and turn her into a stereotypical comic villain.

A super powerful vampire that's tired of regular old human cum travels across the world from her homeland to seduce Loverman with her magic and make him into her permanent food source. Loverman falls victim to her seduction magic, and she fills with power as she milks him dry. But the pleasure of Loverman's magic semen is too much for her, and she loses control over her own magic as it rocks her body. Loverman retakes the advantage- dot dot dot blah blah blah

But also include some of the stuff from your ideas, like other good deeds. Maybe he donates his magic semen on Sundays for lotions to help cure skin cancer. You could make him a bit of an anti-hero too with your idea about what it means for a woman to have sex with him, like he volunteers to fuck and cure women of their reproductive issues but it leads to them being sexually frustrated from then on or to break up with their partners.

But maybe I could get 2 or 3 chapters done and see where it goes. What’s a normal pace of chapter releases for people who write series? Do I have to write the whole megilla before publishing it?

From my very limited experience so far, I would normally suggest that you finish a complete story and publish it in one go.

But I believe (based on absolutely nothing to do with Literotica, btw) that in this case your story could benefit from being more episodic, like an actual old superhero show. I imagine someone could either come in at any point to read a short re-hashed intro and just enjoy the subjects of that particular episode, or follow the overarching story through each episode if they are really invested.

Edit: You could possibly name these without numbers to help get new readers. Like, "Loverman Fucks a Vampire" instead of "Loverman Ch. 6". Assuming this is allowed by Lit. I am planning to do this myself with my next stories but again, not sure yet.

I'm not really qualified to speak on how well this would all actually do on Literotica, but it's definitely a clear vision that comes to my mind at your idea. Silliness could be adjusted to your desires, I could definitely see there being a more serious and emotional subplot here between Loverman and his existing lover, with turmoil as he volunteers himself and is forced to sexually defeat all these lewd supervillains.

Definitely encourage you to give it a go and try writing a few chapters/episodes! No harm in publishing some short ones to see if you get any interest, you can always go back and submit a new edit later if you want or take them down and submit the parts together. (I assume this is fine, I have seen other authors do this but haven't done it myself yet)

Edit: As for pace, I'm not exactly the best person to ask since I'm also new to Literotica. But from what I've seen there's no need to rush yourself, the readers will be quite forgiving of wait times. Everything on this site happens slowly and your stories may be trapped in review hell for weeks anyway, so just take it at leisurely place. (Advice that I really need to take myself)

 

[Lube_it_up]

Has it been done already?

I have not read such stories. But....
"Sweet guy" - Korean webcomic. A strange medical device almost killed MC, after which he emitted constant positive waves from the table. By touching, he alleviates the condition of the sick, and if a person is healthy, he experiences a surge of excitement and erotic pleasure. But superhero themes are not enough.
There is a hentai manga about an exorcist who defeats enemies with his dick. In the second chapter, there is a female terminator from the future. He fucks this terminator and turns her into a real woman with the power of his cock.
There is a hentai about a girl who wants to kill her boyfriend. But every time she tries, a hero appears who stops time and rapes her until she loses consciousness.
This author https://twitter.com/KonekoQParty has a superhero femdom comic. You need to scroll down a bit.
Also, this author https://twitter.com/Lewdstuffart released a story dedicated to NNN. This is a fantasy and not a superhero, but it’s also interesting.

Regarding your story, first of all I agree with @aToyEnjoyer. You should choose a villain of the week format (I call this the sitcom format) so that each chapter stands on its own. Especially if you are not sure how much you will write. Then you can finish at any time without leaving the audience in the middle of the story.

What do I expect from a story like this? Original and bizarre sexual activities are not possible in a more realistic setting. For example: sex with portals, tentacles, etc.
It depends on how you write it, but I find the idea of sex-only superpowers a little strange. I would prefer abilities that can be used for different purposes. And in this regard, I offer two options:
1. MC buys a strange antique figurine at a flea market. Through this figurine, he contacts the ancient Lovecraftian tentacle deity and receives part of its power. Then his power will be associated mainly with tentacles. Over time this will grow and he will find new ways to use this power. But for that option, I think the story of a villain defeating heroes would be more suitable.
2. My favorite childhood cartoon is Ben Ten. It's about a boy who received an artifact that can transform him into various aliens. And each alien has its own unique appearance and abilities. You could use this idea but add a strong sexual aspect to the creatures the MC turns into. Even in the cartoon, the protagonist did not quite understand how to use the device, so he often turned into someone he didn’t want. This can be used for different story situations.
You can also search for Ben Ten hand-drawn porn content to get some inspiration. But I would like this to be an independent story and not fan fiction.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I like this idea but the whole super-hero (tights and capes) idea leaves me cold.
But perhaps if it was done like one of those cheesy feel-good TV shows about someone with special abilities who sort of wanders from town to town helping people in need. Like Saved by an Angel or Highway to Heaven or even the A-Team or Reacher.

A sexually gifted person wanders into town and is immediately drawn to the lonely divorcee who is having a crippling attack of low self-confidence since the SO ran off with the trainer at their gym. The hero smiles and listens and then sort of behind the scenes sets them up to meet people. The right people. In the end, our super-cupid walks off into the sunset to a sad Incredible Hulk theme song. And then you realize the hero is as lonely and damaged as the people they help. Because they can't stop, can't settle down, can't have a love of their own.

 

[AlexBailey]

Your protagonist could be a hero to lonesome damsels or those who are stuck in abusive relationships, maybe he could also have the power to rob someone of their virility or aid them with specialized devices and elixers he keeps on his utility belt. If he's well known he could have adoring fans who are always vying for his attention, but being a superhero and all he has no time for mere mortals.

Superheroes need super villians, so maybe he could come upon a sexy succubus who tricks him into 'attacking ' her only to have the tides turned as she taps his powers and increases her own prowess while draining all of his energy, leaving him soft, sorry, and drained.

The rest of the story could be him being helped by a previously spurned fan who makes it her mission to rehabilitate her hero so he can redeem himself and defeat the villian, possibly with the adoring fan as a new sidekick.

Maybe he could also battle an evil dominatrix who seeks to subjugate him as he struggles with his own suppressed desire for submission....

BTW, some readers are very into tights and capes. ,

 

[DirkCamacho]

After all that "not at all necessary" weird introduction, I'd like to comment on the message first posted on this thread :

Thanks for your very thoughtful response. I am not into superheros at all. The best I can tell you is, Stan Lee, Marvel, DC, and name a few heroes. I actively dislike superhero movies and you won't catch me at one. Obviously I've never heard of Mystique. Cool name, though. So it's great to get some perspective on the characters - what their limits are, what their downside is, most of all, internal conflict. That definitely would make any character more interesting.

I also didn't know about the "sexual super powers" thread. I do enjoy the forums here but just hadn't stumbled across that one. I'll go find it.

What I get out of Literotica, besides the stories and forum photo threads that I will cruise through, is the ability to have a community that is smut-based but intelligent. It's very freeing to just be have conversations about pussy licking fantasies, or big hard cocks, or whatever explicit thoughts and words are in my head. This is the place where I can talk about it with real people, and I can read and write all the smut I want. Without judgement. It seems that most of the folks here are way kinkier than I am. I'm just a middle aged guy who's happily married. We haven't had sex with anyone else since we met, and we don't have any desire. We don't do BDSM or role play. We are vanilla with a capital V. If Literotica were a swim club, I'd belong in the kiddie pool.

My character Loverman isn't a true superhero in the conventional sense. It's probably a mistake to call him a superhero. But as near as I can figure he belongs in the "sci fi and fantasy" category. He is just me with all my dream sexual abilities. Me who can make my cock bigger or smaller on demand. Me who can cum as much as I want, as many times as I want. Me who can send a woman into sexual ecstasy with my magical tongue. Me, whose semen is an aphrodisiac. A guy like this, with those sexual abilities, can be the subject of a steamy smut story once. But if he's going to reappear, then he's going to need some actual character movement. I'm going to have to learn how to write more than just smut scenes. Because I want Loverman/Me to have a lot of sex to go along with his internal character arc.

You've given me more leads to pursue and more research to do. I've already written my first smut scenes, Loverman: Genesis. But I need to put some plot and character in there too because the Lit readers demand it, and also because I think it will be an artistic stretch that I'd like to take.