Sucking a soft dick and making it hard.

[RicoLouis]

I am writing a scene of a girl who begins sucking her boyfriends soft dick after he just woke up and fills it grow in her mouth and got to thinking it isn't something I have ever read in a story so I don't have much of the way of reference other then my imagination. It is even rare in porn as I can think of maybe two or three videos I have seen where the guys dick was soft when the girl went down on him. I am wondering if anyone else has ever written anything like this before.

 

[djrip]

I had a little bit of that in this one. Bottom of page 1.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

I am writing a scene of a girl who begins sucking her boyfriends soft dick after he just woke up and fills it grow in her mouth and got to thinking it isn't something I have ever read in a story so I don't have much of the way of reference other then my imagination. It is even rare in porn as I can think of maybe two or three videos I have seen where the guys dick was soft when the girl went down on him. I am wondering if anyone else has ever written anything like this before.

Is your name Mr. Anderson? If not, how the fuck do you have this


as a join date?

 

[MelissaBaby]

I don’t have a frame of reference for it either. When I walk in the room, they all get hard.

 

[AwkwardlySet]

I don’t have a frame of reference for it either. When I walk in the room, they all get hard.

To quote myself from the other thread - That must be some walk...

 

[EmilyMiller]

I am writing a scene of a girl who begins sucking her boyfriends soft dick after he just woke up and fills it grow in her mouth and got to thinking it isn't something I have ever read in a story so I don't have much of the way of reference other then my imagination. It is even rare in porn as I can think of maybe two or three videos I have seen where the guys dick was soft when the girl went down on him. I am wondering if anyone else has ever written anything like this before.

I’ve written this somewhere, but for the life of me, I can’t recall which story. Sorry.

Em

 

[Djmac1031]

I think there's some unwritten rule in porn that a cock MUST be fully erect before he even undresses.

Of course, we also understand porn is a fabricated reality. We also understand what a "fluffer" is.

I suppose in actual reality, it depends on the situation. If there's been a lot of kissing and touching over the clothes beforehand then yes, there's a good chance the guy is fully hard by the time she gets down to undressing him, let alone sucking.

I wrote a short story called We All Have Needs where a guy meets a random woman at an adult book store and she drags him in the back to have sex in the video booth.

Things happen so quickly that he's still soft when she unzips him. And so yes, she sucks him to full erection before fucking him.

If that kind of scenario suits your story, go for it. Nothing wrong with it.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I think there's some unwritten rule in porn that a cock MUST be fully erect before he even undresses.

I’ve written ED into stories. Albeit temporary.

Em

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

Is your name Mr. Anderson? If not, how the fuck do you have this
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as a join date?

Hah! Timestamp Zero. Looks like someone's join-Date got overwritten in the user-database.

 

[RicoLouis]

Is your name Mr. Anderson? If not, how the fuck do you have this

Not a clue. Some glitch in the matrix. I liked the date so i just said fuck it and never asked it to be fixed. Considering I wasn't born till a decade later and the Internet wasn't a thing yet let alone Lit I find it funny.

I suppose in actual reality, it depends on the situation. If there's been a lot of kissing and touching over the clothes beforehand then yes, there's a good chance the guy is fully hard by the time she gets down to undressing him, let alone sucking.

Mine has the guy just waking up and the girl is a little upset he didn't have morning wood when she surprised him in bed.

 

[Djmac1031]

Mine has the guy just waking up and the girl is a little upset he didn't have morning wood when she surprised him in bed.

We don't ALWAYS wake up with Morning Wood, EVERY day.

You could even have your male character point out that misconception to her.

 

[alohadave]

I think there's some unwritten rule in porn that a cock MUST be fully erect before he even undresses.

Of course, we also understand porn is a fabricated reality. We also understand what a "fluffer" is.

I've seen a couple where the male actor seemed less than enthusiastic and had a half chub through a good part of the scene.

 

[alohadave]

I’ve written ED into stories. Albeit temporary.

Em

I have a scene in a WIP with an elderly man who never gets fully erect, but still enjoys a blowjob.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I have a scene in a WIP with an elderly man who never gets fully erect, but still enjoys a blowjob.

I don’t mention the guy’s age, though he refers to being older than he would like a few times. The person he was based on is mid-fifties.

Em

 

[nice90sguy]

I am wondering if anyone else has ever written anything like this before.

From "Training Libby":

Corky continued fellating air pathetically. "Jesus Christ, you look like a drowning goldfish...", Waldo said, rolling his eyes.

After a minute or two, Waldo said to himself, "Oh well, what the hey..."

He grabbed hold of his dick and slowly pumped it with his fist in an attempt to bring himself back to the boil, but she looked so stupid that he was unable to. With the help of his index fingers he pushed his soft member between her wet lips. They immediately clamped tightly over it. "Oh, shit...." gasped Waldo. Within seconds he was fully aroused.

 

[Djmac1031]

I wrote a scene in The Deal With Lara where my male protagonist loses his erection in the middle of sex.

Not from ED exactly, but he'd already had an orgasm from her blowjob a few hours earlier and while he initially had no trouble getting an erection again when she now wanted sex, it faded out for a bit and he had to take a break before getting it back.

It happens. For all kinds of reasons. No shame in it.

In my story, he used the downtime to please her orally. And when his erection came back, he finished the job.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I am writing a scene of a girl who begins sucking her boyfriends soft dick after he just woke up and fills it grow in her mouth and got to thinking it isn't something I have ever read in a story so I don't have much of the way of reference other then my imagination. It is even rare in porn as I can think of maybe two or three videos I have seen where the guys dick was soft when the girl went down on him. I am wondering if anyone else has ever written anything like this before.

I guess you don't have first-hand experience with this yourself? (I don't mean you're the one doing the sucking but, hey, that's another take on it.) It's one of those things that's difficult to understand from a story or even a video.

 

[gunhilltrain]

I've seen a couple where the male actor seemed less than enthusiastic and had a half chub through a good part of the scene.

I mentioned this on Story Ideas, but I don't think it went over very well with them. Anyway, I suspect that after a while it becomes just another job like putting up sheetrock or assembling washing machines.

 

[gunhilltrain]

Hah! Timestamp Zero. Looks like someone's join-Date got overwritten in the user-database.

Yes. January 1, 1970: "The epoch of the Unix time standard for timestamps in computer programming is at 00:00:00 UTC on this date."

Also, "In Dallas, the University of Texas Longhorns, ranked No. 1 in the nation by the Associated Press, won the Cotton Bowl game, 21 to 17, in the final two minutes against the No. 9 ranked Fighting Irish of the University of Notre Dame. The win allowed the Longhorns, already voted No. 1 in the final UPI poll, to stay unbeaten at with 11 wins and no losses or ties."

As for myself, I was fifteen.

 

[nice90sguy]

I wrote a scene in The Deal With Lara where my male protagonist loses his erection in the middle of sex.

Not from ED exactly, but he'd already had an orgasm from her blowjob a few hours earlier and while he initially had no trouble getting an erection again when she now wanted sex, it faded out for a bit and he had to take a break before getting it back.

It happens. For all kinds of reasons. No shame in it.

In my story, he used the downtime to please her orally. And when his erection came back, he finished the job.

 

[MarksExperiences]

I don’t have a frame of reference for it either. When I walk in the room, they all get hard.

Show me.

 

[stickygirl]

Looks like you have plenty suggestions already, but here's mine from Goalposts

"Lotte's orgasm had only redoubled her lust. Her tongue's soft rasp circled and sucked. She felt Vicki's little flesh growing hard in her mouth. Suddenly powerful -- a slumbering dragon magically awoken and ready to fly.

It wouldn't fit her mouth any more, she could only trap its dragon head, her fingers grasping its slippery length."

YW As an aside, it is fucking hot when it happens!!

 

[gunhilltrain]

Looks like you have plenty suggestions already, but here's mine from Goalposts

"Lotte's orgasm had only redoubled her lust. Her tongue's soft rasp circled and sucked. She felt Vicki's little flesh growing hard in her mouth. Suddenly powerful -- a slumbering dragon magically awoken and ready to fly.

It wouldn't fit her mouth any more, she could only trap its dragon head, her fingers grasping its slippery length."

YW As an aside, it is fucking hot when it happens!!

Not bad, although the "slumbering dragon" is perhaps a bit melodramatic. So this is two women, which the OP didn't mean, but so what?

This is going on another site, but I may do a version here at some point. It's a man going down on a woman (their first time, actually). It takes place on a desk in an unused room in a New Jersey office building. (I'm just not happy unless it's taking place in some location.)

"This time, when she came, she lifted her hips off the desktop and wiggled her genitals against my lips. Her hands held my head in place so I was right where she wanted me. I could feel her body quivering.

And, man, was she loud. Caterwauling was a good way to describe it. Again, I worried about being overheard. But what would anybody do over on the other side? Come in to stop us?"

 

[stickygirl]

Not bad, although the "slumbering dragon" is perhaps a bit melodramatic. So this is two women, which the OP didn't mean, but so what?

This is going on another site, but I may do a version here at some point. It's a man going down on a woman (their first time, actually). It takes place on a desk in an unused room in a New Jersey office building. (I'm just not happy unless it's taking place in some location.)

"This time, when she came, she lifted her hips off the desktop and wiggled her genitals against my lips. Her hands held my head in place so I was right where she wanted me. I could feel her body quivering.

And, man, was she loud. Caterwauling was a good way to describe it. Again, I worried about being overheard. But what would anybody do over on the other side? Come in to stop us?"

The OP said dick.
One of them has a dick

 

[gunhilltrain]

The OP said dick.
One of them has a dick

Sorry, I missed the context. Their names were Lotte and Vicki. But then I have someone on here with a dick named Joanna.