Submission

[bashfull]

Submit (see the play on words there?) a poem about submission, either as a Dom or a sub. Below is something I wrote a few years ago on my Musings (Newbie) thread:

Bound by cuffs,
Bound by words,
Bound by gazes unbroken.
Amazing how much can be said
With words unspoken

 

[sanjuinmood]

Tied to her wishes
He now kneels
Bound by her tender love
He now heeds
Cowed by her solid stare
He now pleads
Down on his knees for her
In love he submits

 

[ShylyObscene]

Heaven is When I’m With You

I’m on my knees
Be my selfish prayer
Bless my lips
Anoint my hair

Imbibe the submission
Like a sweet red wine
Leave your mark
Line by line

Sweating confessions
But nothing to forgive
Ignoring the judgment
Only way to live

A bed for an alter
Your willing sacrifice
Kissed by fire
Not baptized in ice

Your body, a church
Your voice, a hymn
Genuflect on the carpet
And sing of sin

Heaven’s when I’m with you
The Nirvana I want sent to

 

[FireForYou]

Heaven is When I’m With You

I’m on my knees
Be my selfish prayer
Bless my lips
Anoint my hair

Imbibe the submission
Like a sweet red wine
Leave your mark
Line by line

Sweating confessions
But nothing to forgive
Ignoring the judgment
Only way to live

A bed for an alter
Your willing sacrifice
Kissed by fire
Not baptized in ice

Your body, a church
Your voice, a hymn
Genuflect on the carpet
And sing of sin

Heaven’s when I’m with you
The Nirvana I want sent to

So vivid in imagery, so intense in emotion, so filled with symbolism. Beautiful...

 

[firmwaltz]

Her knees bending
Sheets gather around quivering feet
Cold, or nervous or vibrating with the intake of breath?
Stirring with submission and still somehow withholding.
Do her tightly bound wrists not tell her?—Enough!
Enough of the tension, breathe!

She wriggles, but palms spread thighs and pin legs wide.
Open, open for me.
Let me see.
The warm glistening. My eyes trying hard not to lock in, but to look up.
At you, a bitten lip, echoed by you, or me?
Hard to tell who started it.
But now I'm starting it.