strange story-don't understand

[highxqd]

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=72746

This is a story about a pregnant lady getting raped. And i think it is rather weird. i just don't understand fetish with pregnant women. not sliming or anything but this story doesn't even have an object??? does it? but then it's one of a kind...

 

[Guest]

I think pregnant women can be sexy. Some people find lactation a kink. But it all depends how good the writing is as well as the story line itself. Speaking as a man, visual aids might help if the quality of writing was less than satisfactry.

As for this story, a heavily pregnant woman - quadriplets inside her - wants to get fucked. Hormonal thing. The husband is exausted, thus need a helping hand. Pops in the best buddy. You know how it goes.

Put me right off.

If you are the author of the story, don't be upset. Look how bad my paragraph structuring is.

Not to mention spelling...

And grammar as a whole...

Just re-register with another ID, put up a feminie av and come to the General Board. I'll be your best friend and turn you into a lesbian.

 

[secret_love]

Hi,

I had to force myself to finish reading this story! This was not badly written, and if I had some fantasy of raping a pregnant woman, it might have turned me on. I think.

I am inspired to write a "Jenny's Revenge" story about this guy and the sorry husband.

Cheers,

SL

 

[Croissant]

it's payback time!

i say don't get mad; get even - how about Jenny seducing her husband and his buddy to a hill cabin for a weeklong fuckfest and then offering them as hole-in-the-wall fuckslaves for 5 cents each?

 

[secret_love]

Hi Croissant,

I wrote part I already! I couldn't stop. I also could not work in the best friend, but believe me, he deserves to be punished, too! Can you take a look at it and give your comments? If you like the premise, how do you feel about writing part II?

(BTW, I am going to send an email to the author. Just in case he has any really big objection to a response story. I am not sure what the etiquette is for that.)

SL

Here goes,
Jenny's Revenge:

For the past five years, Jennifer Milano's husband Brian had used her body to satisfy his sick sexual fantasies. Jenny knew that it was her duty to obey her man, but this year he had gone too far.

For nine excruciating months, Brian had actually made her pretend to be pregnant! The petite woman had to potter around the house cooking, cleaning and fucking as usual, while supporting an ungainly prosthetic stomach. And why? All because she had lost a stupid football bet. What did she, a flower-arranging, pilates-practicing housewife know about sports?

Yes, Brian Milano definitely did not play fair. And tonight Jennifer was not going to play fair either.

Hearing the front door open, she ran to the foyer to greet her husband with a kiss. The petite housewife was clad in a lacy, black open-front brassiere and crotchless panties. Brian's favorite "fuck-me" outfit, and just the thing to catch him off guard.

"Good evening my little slut," he said, eyeing her large, erect nipples.

"Hi sweetie, " Jenny replied, closing the door. Then swift as lightning, she whipped out the stun gun and zapped her life partner several times directly in the face.

"Gwakkkk. Gllluuhh," the lummox gurgled incoherently as his wife rapidly shackled his hands to the iron hoop that she had secretly installed in the wall. She then shocked him a few more times with the weapon, just to show him who was boss. As her husband writhed in pain, Jennifer shackled his beefy legs to two other rings in the floor. Brian looked up from his semi-reclining position, tears welling up in his big, green eyes.

"Stop crying, you fucking pussy!" she said harshly and slapped him in the face. His reddening skin and the tingle on her palm matched the trembling heat now building in her wet vagina. Brian was a beautiful man. Everyone said how lucky she was to be his wife. Nevertheless, she had never been able to enjoy making love to him the way she knew she was going to enjoy it tonight!

Jennifer pulled out her shiny, new hunting knife. Her prisoner's wide-eyed gaze followed the blade as she brought it to the tip of his nose.

"Mr. Milano, tonight you are going to eat my pussy." Brian started to smile. Now he got the picture, the little wife just wanted some sex. But if she thought he was going to go down on her, she was crazy. The Bri-man ate pizza and steak and just about anything else, but NOT hair pie!

"Stop smiling, bitch!" screamed Jenny, and slapped him again, hard. "You'll smile when I fucking tell you to smile. I want you to say 'Yes Mam.' Tonight , you are going to eat my pussy." Seeing him hesitate, the turned-on wife slapped her husband again several times in the face, and then brought the knife to his throat.

"Y-y-yes mmam," the terrified man stuttered. He was beginning to get the idea. Apparently years of abuse and sexual frustration had turned his wife into a psychopath!

"Tonight you are going to let me fuck you up the ass like the little whore you are."

"Yes, Mam." Upon hearing the obedient response, Jennifer began to remove her husband's shoes and socks. She then proceeded to rip his clothes off with the enormous knife, accidentally cutting him a few times.

Instead of making her queasy, Brian's little candy-assed shrieks and the droplets of blood that settled on his skin just made Jenny's nipples harden with anticipation. By the time she had removed his blue oxford shirt, she was straddling the big, powerful body. Sticky, crystal drops of hot love juice fell slowly from her wet snatch onto Brian's hardening cock.

Jenny turned around to look at her husband's now fully erect member. Brian was proud of his nine-inch cock; but his wife would be damned if he had ever learned how to use it properly! Still holding the knife to his throat, she inched backwards and rubbed the thick, capped head into her wetness. "What the heck," she thought in ecstasy, "He can't move any way," and tossed the knife into a corner. Then with both hands, she rubbed the warm, silky tip of her husbands big, veiny penis over her swollen clitoris. Back and forth and in slow, delicious circles.

Jennifer Milano was in ecstasy.

"Time for dinner, Brian," she said raising herself off of the floor. Her husband was so tall, that she only had to bend her knees slightly for his hot mouth to reach her tingling love button. Without any prompting from her, Brian obediently extended his sticky pink tongue and licked timidly at her clitoris.

Jenny shuddered as her vaginal walls contracted. She had seen men doing this in the dirty movies that Brian sometimes made her watch, but she never knew anything could feel so good!

She raised her hips a little, and brushed her clitoris across the tip of Brian's nose as he sank his scalding hot tongue into her dripping love chute. "Oh yes, slave boy, " Janet cried softly, "your hot little tongue is making your mistress's pussy feel so good." Brian groaned into her cunt. He loved it when his wife talked dirty!

Unable to control herself any longer, Jenny pulled her trembling vagina away from her husband's eager mouth. She squatted over his powerful lap and guided his big prick into her simmering snatch. For the first time, the horny home-maker enjoyed every inch as it slowly penetrated the core of her sex.

Jennifer sighed as the entire length of her husband's long, thick penis stretched the slick walls of her vagina. She looked into his eyes, with their dark lashes still wet from his recent tears. Brian almost looked like the nineteen year old boy that she had fallen in love with five years ago! She moved her hips up and down, impaling her pussy on his big slick pole, biting her lips softly every time her clitoris rubbed against the smooth skin of his slightly protruding paunch. She was dying to feel his hands squeezing her small soft breasts, but she didn't dare let him go now!

"Oh Brian, I love you, " Jennifer whispered as she gyrated faster on his lap. Her wet pussy was leaking rivulets of love juice that ran in cool tributaries over Brian's balls. He wanted to thrust deep into her moist snatch. He was so close, but the shackles on his wrists and ankles denied all freedom of movement!

Suddenly, Jenny's arms grasped his neck as violent spasms rocked her small frame. Brian had never felt his wife have an orgasm before. Her tight pussy contracted around his cock, making the blood pound in his ears like a thousand drums. Against reason, he strained upward, trying to thrust his penis deeper inside her hot, pulsating love box.

"Oh no you don't," thought Jenny as she regained her senses. Brian Milano deserved a harsh punishment, and if she had her way, he was not going to come for a very long time. On trembling legs, our heroine lifted herself off of her husband's lap. Her pussy made a sloppy sucking noise as it released Brian's enormous, erect penis. All nine inches, from the furry base to the silky tip, glistened with her lubrication.


* * *
Believe it or not, Jenny's Revenge has only begun. Just wait and see what happens to Brian in Part II!

 

[highxqd]

kinky yes-but sexy? maybe the knocking -up part.
milano-sopranos-mob connection eh?

 

[dr_mabeuse]

highxqd,

I read the story. I think the bewilderment you expressed at the start of this thread comes from the fact that this isn't so much a sex story as it is a violence-against-women story. The fact that the violence is directed against a pregnant woman and is perpetrated by the woman's husband and his "best buddy" just adds to the overall loathsomeness of the piece.

Women generally do get sexier in the early stages of pregnancy, but this story just reeked of some sort of infantile rage against mommy's having another baby. The homosexual implications between the guy and his buddy didn't help any, and the author's total ignorance of what a pregnant mother even looks like adds to the overall feeling of psychotic fantasy

But I'm afraid I'm making it sound more interesting than it is. Take from me, readers, skip it.

---dr.M.