Story: The Briefcase

[RicoLouis]

Okay just added a new story called the briefcase. It's my first try at a science fiction story on here. Sort of Lost meets heroes.

Basically involves a bum living on the beach in miami finding a breif case full of stuff that he gives to a pawn shop for booze money. But the owner of the briefcase dissappered a decade ago in the triangle. Now the case returns and the objects in the case are no longer what they seem.

I even made a list of some of the objects and some of there powers though anyone can add more. I left the story pretty open so it can cotain anything invisability, time stop, mind control.

Fill free to check it out and add on to it if you like.

http://www.chyoo.com:81/index.php/main.story.page/62406

 

[wicker]

Does the owner of the briefcase get everything in it? If so, that would be a LOT of things to control and write about.
Would it be OK if as soon as a person took an object, the case went to a different owner?

 

[Torg]

This sounds more like The Lost Room, rather than Lost. But it sounds interesting nonetheless.

 

[RicoLouis]

Actually I havn't written it yet but I was planning on the shop keeper will put all the objects out to sell through out the store. So the shop keeper is sort of a central charecter who meets all of the other object owners. While some of the objects end up in the trash. To be found by the gargbage man, street bums, or someother person.

Think I will work on that tonight.

Yea I stole a little bit of the lost room though I only ever saw like the last twenty miniutes of that. Also part of the idea came from the story cursed objects.

 

[RicoLouis]

Okay added two new objects to the list to be sold in the pawn shop.
Gloves that grant the user telekentics
A Key Chain that allows the user to teleport to anydoor he has a key to. Okay I saw the matrix one to many times. : )

Also added two more threads to the pawn shop owners path.

 

[wicker]

added to it. Hope you like and can add to it

 

[RicoLouis]

Yep, thanks wicker for introducing the third object to the story. The watch. Its a good start. I added a follow up thread myself though you are more then welcome to add your own.

 

[RicoLouis]

Good new thread wicker. Remind me to actually never give you any magical objects. : ).

I added a new thread myself following the cop and the glasses and how he learns about there power.

 

[wicker]

hope we can continue working off each other's posts

 

[RicoLouis]

Hopefully
New author catfish27 has added a thread to the pencil path.


I have added 3 threads
1 following wickers
1 following the reporter
1 introducing the construction worker and the glasses that allow you to become invisable.

 

[wicker]

i threw the pen into the mix and added to the watch thread.

 

[RicoLouis]

Thanks wicker, just got to figure out how to make it deffrent then pencil.
Okay powers so far.
Pencil- Reality altering
Sun glasses- invisabilty
Eye glasses- See future
watch- stops time
Pills - Regeneration
Any suggestions off other powers people would like to see?

 

[wicker]

well, the way I saw it is that the pencil draws, and the pen writes.