Story telling and what you look for.

[Carl East]

I thought this would make a refreshing change, why don't we (I thought) talk about stories. After all that's how most of you found this site in the first place.

Anyway, the question is what do you look for in an erotic story. Is the sex all important or is the build up to sex something that gets you off.

Or is there only a certain sort of tale that will do it for you, such as group or gay etc.

Carl

 

[Starblayde]

Any story must have great descriptive language, realistic characters (if they're supposed to be realistic)... and give me a big thick hard-on

 

[Lovepotion69]

Any story must have great descriptive language, realistic characters (if they're supposed to be realistic)... and give me a big thick hard-on

Babe, you get a hardon just by a me breathing on you...

 

[enjoyingitall]

I look for those stories that fall in line with fantasies I have. I want a plot, with realistic characters engaging in things that I haven't. I want the conversations to fall in line with the plot. I don't like stories that have characters saying things that just don't quite mesh with their personality. For the most part, it's the build up that grabs my attention, but that's not to say that I don't want hot sex to be included in the story line as well.

 

[Starblayde]

Babe, you get a hardon just by a me breathing on you...

True, very true

 

[Carl East]

I look for those stories that fall in line with fantasies I have. I want a plot, with realistic characters engaging in things that I haven't. I want the conversations to fall in line with the plot. I don't like stories that have characters saying things that just don't quite mesh with their personality. For the most part, it's the build up that grabs my attention, but that's not to say that I don't want hot sex to be included in the story line as well.

Let me ask you a question then that might help me, is this descriptive (or built up) enough as an intro, or is it lacking something.

Awesome, that was the word that escaped my lips the day I first laid my eyes on Laura. I’d been standing in the waiting room of Professor Cheatles lab, when she opened the door next to me and stepped inside.

Her long legs and short skirt were the first things you noticed, at least from behind. The way she carried herself though, you could tell this was a woman of confidence. I hadn’t seen her face by the time she started to talk to the secretary, but her voice held me captivated.

Such sweet tones coming from such a slender figure as hers, was more than I could take. I just had to see her face, so I walked over to the desk to enquire as to how much longer I would be kept waiting.

Once there I casually took a glance in the young ladies direction, I wasn’t disappointed. Her face lit up as if surrounded by a light glow, her lips ruby red and her cleavage heaving beneath her tight white blouse.

I simply smiled and was surprised to receive a similar facial expression, her lips parting slightly revealing a perfect set of white teeth.


Carl

 

[Siren]

my favs are.........

 

[enjoyingitall]

That's an interesting intro, makes me want to know what happens next. So, yes I would keep reading a story with that beginning.

 

[Carl East]

Re: my favs are.........

anal
&
group sex.

or a mixture thereof.

I'll be right over. lol

Carl

 

[Carl East]

That's an interesting intro, makes me want to know what happens next. So, yes I would keep reading a story with that beginning.

Thank you, that happens to be the start of a new story, one that entails a man being tested with a new wonder sex drug.

I'll leave you guessing the rest. lol

Carl

 

[Siren]

Well CE

 

[Carl East]

Re: Well CE

since I have seen a pic of your 'equipment '.........

I would definitely say.......

you qualify as a GROUP all by yourself.

LMAO, you little minx you, how have you been keeping, I hope all is well in your part of the globe.

Carl

 

[Siren]

My 'globes' and everything else are

 

[Allison484]

Let me ask you a question then that might help me, is this descriptive (or built up) enough as an intro, or is it lacking something.

Awesome, that was the word that escaped my lips the day I first laid my eyes on Laura. I’d been standing in the waiting room of Professor Cheatles lab, when she opened the door next to me and stepped inside.

Her long legs and short skirt were the first things you noticed, at least from behind. The way she carried herself though, you could tell this was a woman of confidence. I hadn’t seen her face by the time she started to talk to the secretary, but her voice held me captivated.

Such sweet tones coming from such a slender figure as hers, was more than I could take. I just had to see her face, so I walked over to the desk to enquire as to how much longer I would be kept waiting.

Once there I casually took a glance in the young ladies direction, I wasn’t disappointed. Her face lit up as if surrounded by a light glow, her lips ruby red and her cleavage heaving beneath her tight white blouse.

I simply smiled and was surprised to receive a similar facial expression, her lips parting slightly revealing a perfect set of white teeth.


Carl

Definitely a good intro. Does your story have a name yet? Inquiring minds want to know.

Allison

 

[KillerMuffin]

I'm not very picky. I just want stories that are as good as or, preferably, better than mine. Easy!

 

[Carl East]

Definitely a good intro. Does your story have a name yet? Inquiring minds want to know.

Allison

Thank you, as yet no title, I usually discover the title during writing. You see my methods are a little bit unorthordox, as I don't even know what's going to happen next until I start typing.

I make up stories as I go along, although there have been a few exceptions.

Carl

 

[naudiz]

I like a plot. I want the characters to be interesting. I want them to be doing something plot-worthy. That doesn't mean the sex should be pushed to the margins, but the story holds my interesting if the sex is relevant to something besides getting off messily and often. Mind you, getting off messily and often should happen, too. It helps if the sex is exciting, what with it being an erotic story and all.

I like imagery. I like stories that give me some sense of being there. Well-written is a bonus. I'm such a snob.

 

[Carl East]

I'm not very picky. I just want stories that are as good as or, preferably, better than mine. Easy!

So you've never read mine then, cause no way could I compete with you. lol

Carl

ps please tell me that av is you, I have fantasies about that picture. lol