Story research

[Sir_Winston54]

I can't begin to tell the world how much I hate hate hate small devices. I am a keyboard size queen.

I know the feeling. My hands are *large,* and for me to text on my cell phone, which requires up to 4 or 5 "poinks" for each letter... I want to get a full-sized keyboard I can plug into my phone for texting.

 

[Tink_A_Bella]

To everyone,

Thanks guys for all the replies. The advice is extremly helpful, I've got a much better idea how to achieve and write (hopefully) what I have in my head.

Although this story started out as non concent, where, although reluctant, she loves what he does to her, its kind of taking a route of its own. I think over the next few chapters they will reach a point where she desperately wants to make him happy and he worships everything about her.

I will undoubtably need more advice along the way, I feel a lot more comfortable about asking now.

Any advice etc is still very much welcome as the chapter is no where near written yet, (I like to write, leave it a while, come back and edit appropriately, and finaly post) so I am still very much open to feedback.
I just wanted to thank everyone for the brilliant help so far.
If anyone is interested I will let you know when I post and let me know if I've got it right.

As to posting on a mobile, its a right bitch! (Click click, click click click click!)