Story of our incest fantasy

[MrStiffyTwo]

My fiancee and I have been together almost eight years now (we are both 55) and we have an incredibly wonderful and active sex life. We've been exploring our thoughts on having a threesome with a younger man but who? One night, after dinner with my son (he's 22), she was very frisky and said she was curious if he was "built" like me. Well, that certainly got our imaginations rolling! The more we discuss it, the hornier we get and we love to discuss the various acts we'd like to have with him.

We aren't sure if or how we would make this a reality but I'd like to write a fictional story based upon it. If I only had time! I'm working over 60 hours a week right now.

We do you guys think? Would our very naughty fantasy make for a good story?

 

[Carnevil9]

I don't know. It has a sort of predatory vibe to it. If the son were the instigator and pursuer in the sexual relationship, it would be much more palatable as a story. Maybe it's just me, but "parent pursuing child" has a major power-abuse feel.

Of course, as a fantasy in the bedroom with just you and your lady really involved, nobody gets hurt. Go for it!

 

[ElliottEden]

Hmmm.... But it's the fiancé who'd be chasing the son so doesn't that fall into a traditional theme? You know - the step mom who seduces the step son/daughter/both? From that angle why not?

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

My fiancee and I have been together almost eight years [...] with my son (he's 22), [...]

Call me nitpicky... but I don't see the incest you mentioned in the title.
Since she's not even your wife, I don't see any taboo at all.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I think next year I'm going to keep a tally of all of the "please write my fantasies because I <insert excuse here>," threads we get. We'll start a pool in January.

 

[CuttingEdge]

I think next year I'm going to keep a tally of all of the "please write my fantasies because I <insert excuse here>," threads we get. We'll start a pool in January.

@sirhugs as well...

I feel compelled to make a write-up encouraging people convinced they cannot write, to write. You guys and girls have all seen my multiple of replies, encouraging anyone and everyone to write. But if I write something like that, it sure would be nice to have it as a sticky at the top of the Story Idea section so it can be continually seen and not lost in digital decay on a thread. I am willing to write that encouragement thread starter though as I am adamant about encouraging everyone to write stories.

As for not having time?

Bullshit!!

I work 60-70 hour weeks as an electrical high voltage lineman, and am on call 24/7/365 a year... YET... I can kick out a non-erotic mainstream published novel every 3-4 months, or roughly (3) 90,000 word novels in a year. We all have 24 hours in a day, and it is what we put in that time span that determines what we get done, and what is not done.

Just as an example of how the math on this works, the original poster of this typed out a 150 word first post thread starter. Do that every day for a month, and they would have a 4500 word story. At that rate (150 words per day), a person could write (12) 4500 erotic stories per year! I am not sure what the average length erotic story is, but that would be close I would think.

As for me, could I write more if I was not on this site? Maybe? I get on here early as I cannot write anything pubishable before my coffee kicks in, but be on here, and make replies? Sure, why not? It's why I often make grammar and spelling mistakes... I just woke up. If I am on here a lot, like today, then rest assured I am struggling a bit on where to go with the novel I am working on.

But time to write... we all got time to sit down and write something. Over time it adds up to a story... or a novel!

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

@sirhugs as well...

I feel compelled to make a write-up encouraging people convinced they cannot write, to write. You guys and girls have all seen my multiple of replies, encouraging anyone and everyone to write. But if I write something like that, it sure would be nice to have it as a sticky at the top of the Story Idea section so it can be continually seen and not lost in digital decay on a thread. I am willing to write that encouragement thread starter though as I am adamant about encouraging everyone to write stories.

As for not having time?

Bullshit!!

I work 60-70 hour weeks as an electrical high voltage lineman, and am on call 24/7/365 a year... YET... I can kick out a non-erotic mainstream published novel every 3-4 months, or roughly (3) 90,000 word novels in a year. We all have 24 hours in a day, and it is what we put in that time span that determines what we get done, and what is not done.

Just as an example of how the math on this works, the original poster of this typed out a 150 word first post thread starter. Do that every day for a month, and they would have a 4500 word story. At that rate (150 words per day), a person could write (12) 4500 erotic stories per year! I am not sure what the average length erotic story is, but that would be close I would think.

As for me, could I write more if I was not on this site? Maybe? I get on here early as I cannot write anything pubishable before my coffee kicks in, but be on here, and make replies? Sure, why not? It's why I often make grammar and spelling mistakes... I just woke up. If I am on here a lot, like today, then rest assured I am struggling a bit on where to go with the novel I am working on.

But time to write... we all got time to sit down and write something. Over time it adds up to a story... or a novel!

Thoroughly agree!

Well, maybe not with the part where you admit to being the literary equivalent of a thirteen-year-old Chinese boy in an iPhone factory... but encouraging people to write, that I'm on board with!

 

[FantasySharer1]

Hot fantasy. Would be great if son had a recent rough breakup and is consoled by step-mom that ends up leading into sex.

Could also by that step-mom is bit of a nympho and needs more than what Dad is putting out, and Dad realizes he doesn't trust anyone more than his own son and gives them both "permission".

Another hot scenario is that stepmom is halfway the age between the Dad and son.

18 year old Son
27 year old wife/stepmom
36 year old husband/dad

Fitting in right between their generations, she enjoys wonderfully deep relationships with both of them.

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

Dad was 18 years old at the birth of his son..? Possible but I don't tend to buy into incest stories where age differences are compressed. I say let's celebrate the real age gaps, why not? Keep the shock factor.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

I say let's celebrate the real age gaps, why not? Keep the shock factor.

Yeah, shock factor all the way!

Let's not only say the parents were at a reasonable age when starting their family, like their mid-twenties or something. Let's also drive the point home and make the MC the third child. Of course, we also have to give all of the children equally realistic gaps between their births. And, while we're at it, let's stop with the whole crap about the eighteen-year-old high school senior being a good lover for their respective parent, meaning they should have finished college before anything juicy happens.

So, by the time MC joins the flock, their parents would be... in their late sixties?
That's surely gonna appeal to SO many readers! Incest has always been all about that realism!

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

You'd be surprised. And I say: bring on the gap-toothed grannies, too.

You engage in the basic error committed by the great majority of 'writers' here, along with most of the porn industry, namely to believe that the readership is only ever interested in six-pack hunks and piano-keyboard-plastic-smile bimbos, nobody to be of an age greater than forty.

Some people are sick to death of that, although the tongue-hanging-out moron audience can still be counted on.

I'll give you this, though... you live up to your username, the first element in particular.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

You'd be surprised. And I say: bring on the gap-toothed grannies, too.

You engage in the basic error committed by the great majority of 'writers' here, along with most of the porn industry, namely to believe that the readership is only ever interested in six-pack hunks and piano-keyboard-plastic-smile bimbos, nobody to be of an age greater than forty.

Some people are sick to death of that, although the tongue-hanging-out moron audience can still be counted on.

I'll give you this, though... you live up to your username, the first element in particular.

I give you this: I have no doubt that there are, indeed, people who would appreciate this. Though, going by what I have seen in ratings and comments, I still believe that the vast majority of incest readers simply enjoy the taboo fantasy only. Meaning, there are A LOT more people enjoying MILFs over GILFs.

 

[Rob_Royale]

And, while we're at it, let's stop with the whole crap about the eighteen-year-old high school senior being a good lover for their respective parent, meaning they should have finished college before anything juicy happens.

It's been working fine for me. I've had female readers commend me for it. They seem to like the 28-year-old firefighter over the postpubescent kid who still only has to shave once a week.

 

[CuttingEdge]

You engage in the basic error committed by the great majority of 'writers' here, along with most of the porn industry, namely to believe that the readership is only ever interested in six-pack hunks and piano-keyboard-plastic-smile bimbos, nobody to be of an age greater than forty.

You are indeed right.

I admit that I have been guilty of this as well, but the best characters are those the reader can relate too. The closer to their age, the better it will be.

I just found a story I had written a long time ago and sent it to a friend, but prefaced it with an apology because the age gap was pronounced. It had to be to make the ending of the story profound, but you make such a valid point. Why apologize? If there is an age gap, so be it if it makes the story. So much better if it makes the story itself better.

Well said and timely! (You as well @OverconfidentSarcasm )

 

[AshRynn87]

I think next year I'm going to keep a tally of all of the "please write my fantasies because I <insert excuse here>," threads we get. We'll start a pool in January.

Kinda how I got my start writing. Always found stories that were close to my fantasy, but never quite hit the nail on the head. Finally just decided to write my own. Never thought to ask someone else to write it

 

[FantasySharer1]

In this specific fantasy it was just a matter of keeping the woman as close as possible to both men's ages - right in the middle.

I think plenty of incestuous and other fantasies with wider age gaps are amazing and would be plenty of fun.

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

You are indeed right.

I admit that I have been guilty of this as well, but the best characters are those the reader can relate too. The closer to their age, the better it will be.

I just found a story I had written a long time ago and sent it to a friend, but prefaced it with an apology because the age gap was pronounced. It had to be to make the ending of the story profound, but you make such a valid point. Why apologize? If there is an age gap, so be it if it makes the story. So much better if it makes the story itself better.

Well said and timely! (You as well @OverconfidentSarcasm )

Thanks but a reader doesn't have to 'relate' personally to characters in a story. This is another misconception. All that the characters need to be is reasonably realistic, i.e. recognisable as true to life, perhaps to people that the reader knows or has some experience of.

You would be limiting yourself severely and unnecessarily by trying to produce some kind of 'age synchronisation' situation. Of course, if you're only trying to appeal to readers within a very narrow age range, fine, but how are you going to get incest into that? I mean, seriously?

I still say: let it rip. This taboo is worth exploring and that means in all its possibilities.

 

[OverconfidentSarcasm]

Thanks but a reader doesn't have to 'relate' personally to characters in a story. This is another misconception. All that the characters need to be is reasonably realistic, i.e. recognisable as true to life, perhaps to people that the reader knows or has some experience of.

A misconception? That's a... bold statement to make for the whole of literotica readers. Here's why I have so much trouble accepting your argument. It sounds like:

"A reader doesn't have to relate to characters on a personal level. The characters only have to be realistic enough so the readers can relate to them on a personal level."

I actually agree with that! Only for completely different reasons.

If you write a story and paint a picture with your words, people reading it will start imagining that scene from their first-person POV. They will unintentionally and involuntarily place themselves in that scene. If it's described in a way that includes all involved characters, the readers will stand invisible in a corner, watching the whole thing play out. If you only give a description of a character's looks, the readers will imagine that character standing right in front of them, allowing the readers to inspect their appearance.

Why? Because that's how we have perceived the world surrounding us since birth. Everything we've seen, we've seen through our own eyes. So, when we imagine seeing something, we imagine it as if we were actually seeing it personally. We don't know any other way to imagine something. Out-of-body experiences and astral projections are not as common as some people claim.

You would be limiting yourself severely and unnecessarily by trying to produce some kind of 'age synchronisation' situation. Of course, if you're only trying to appeal to readers within a very narrow age range, fine, but how are you going to get incest into that? I mean, seriously?

So, please, go ahead and prove me wrong. Write a story featuring a sixty-five-year-old granny, and don't skimp on the details when describing her body! Go into as much detail as you would with a thirty years younger MILF. I expect flowery language while talking about all the kinky things she can do with her mouth after taking her dentures out. Otherwise, I'm afraid most readers will simply imagine the MILF... with white hair.

I'm excited to see how many favorable comments this will get you, in relation to how many readers will only make it to the comment section to tell you how this is not what they wanted. After all, according to you, it's all the other authors writing characters conforming with the usual beauty standards, who are the ones REALLY narrowing down their audience.

 

[DarkSollat]

Dad was 18 years old at the birth of his son..? Possible but I don't tend to buy into incest stories where age differences are compressed. I say let's celebrate the real age gaps, why not? Keep the shock factor.

This is the exact age everyone in erotica published here had their first child.

 

[CuttingEdge]

Thanks but a reader doesn't have to 'relate' personally to characters in a story. This is another misconception. All that the characters need to be is reasonably realistic, i.e. recognisable as true to life, perhaps to people that the reader knows or has some experience of.

You would be limiting yourself severely and unnecessarily by trying to produce some kind of 'age synchronisation' situation. Of course, if you're only trying to appeal to readers within a very narrow age range, fine, but how are you going to get incest into that? I mean, seriously?

I still say: let it rip. This taboo is worth exploring and that means in all its possibilities.

I realize I am different in my writing, and really try to make my writing a good reader experience. I do that in a variety of ways, and getting readers to relate to characters is just one of the ways I do that. I just don't prescribe into the concept of, "write what you like, and others will too". I really try and make any story I write read really smoothly and intensely. But I do recognize that my stories tend to be longer than most erotic stories because they are more complex, so I do have the room to include more characteristic traits.

As for age synchronization, that is not as difficult as you might think. 80% of people on this site are male, and between the ages of 35-55. That is a huge percentage for a pretty narrow band. That of course does not mean there are not young females, or older males or any derivative thereof, and why I gave you accolades for your first comment. Putting a character at that age is going to resonate with a huge number of readers on this site instantly. That does not mean a person cannot follow the story where it goes. I wrote one where the ending was intensified by having a much larger age gap between characters, but it also took some prose to explain that age gap so the story remained plausible.

Relatable character though to me, is HUGE. Take the movie Die Hard for instance. The main character was great. Struggling in a relationship. Tenacious. Wants to do the right thing...these are things we can all relate too. And even the side character where the cop at the bottom admits he killed a boy with a toy gun...while I have never done that, I can relate in that I have made some huge mistakes because of false perception. But the villain? We all were glad to see that guy fall to his death, but he was just mean. He had no qualities about him I could relate too, and why the God Father was such a higher grossing movie than Die Hard, even though they were bad, they had endearing qualities we could relate too.

Die Hard was a good movie, but the God Father was better, and all because we get sucked into movies and books when we can relate to all characters.

 

[sirhugs]

Nothing beats Casablanca...

 

[Jessica13k]

My fiancee and I have been together almost eight years now (we are both 55) and we have an incredibly wonderful and active sex life. We've been exploring our thoughts on having a threesome with a younger man but who? One night, after dinner with my son (he's 22), she was very frisky and said she was curious if he was "built" like me. Well, that certainly got our imaginations rolling! The more we discuss it, the hornier we get and we love to discuss the various acts we'd like to have with him.

We aren't sure if or how we would make this a reality but I'd like to write a fictional story based upon it. If I only had time! I'm working over 60 hours a week right now.

We do you guys think? Would our very naughty fantasy make for a good story?

This would make a great story. What I find interesting is the relationship you have with your wife whereby you can discuss this kind of fantasy. I'm both impressed and envious.

 

[Reenigam]

Thanks but a reader doesn't have to 'relate' personally to characters in a story. This is another misconception. All that the characters need to be is reasonably realistic, i.e. recognisable as true to life, perhaps to people that the reader knows or has some experience of.

You would be limiting yourself severely and unnecessarily by trying to produce some kind of 'age synchronisation' situation. Of course, if you're only trying to appeal to readers within a very narrow age range, fine, but how are you going to get incest into that? I mean, seriously?

I still say: let it rip. This taboo is worth exploring and that means in all its possibilities.

Absolutely. This is almost a given.

Stories - at least good, enjoyable ones - would never get written if writers were forever focussing narrowly on some bizarre concept of what makes a character "identifiable with" to them. How can they possibly ensure that this is "transferable" to others, namely, each individual reader? Preposterous.

Beyond the self-evident, basic need to have characters and settings which are acceptably (and therein lies a good deal of work/skill) true to the experience of a reasonably average reader, any writer worth the name has to let his imagination roam free.

You're right also about the age restriction business. This does not happen in real life - specifically in relation to incest - and is clearly an artefact designed to suit someone's purposes or personal taste.