Story idea - religious muslim to slut

[Oscarnazario94]

I have an idea of a 18 year old muslim South Asian girl who's very religious wears a hijab and loose clothes. She goes to university and slowly becomes more westernised eventually she begins to get more curious. By the end of the story series she'd have her virginity taken by a virgin guy going through a similar thing, had explored with girls threesomes orgys etc. And finally helping a young guy lose his virginity now she is experienced

 

[Zootonius]

I suspect you use of the word “slut” turned caused many to skip this. It’s too negative. If you’d said sexually liberated, that would have sounded better.

 

[sirhugs]

The content guidelines ban "Works that promote or focus heavily on politics or religion, or political or religious figures."
You would need to make it cultural, not religious.

 

[Rob_Royale]

You would need to make it cultural, not religious.

Or make it completely non-denominational. You could just have two people from religiously conservative upbringings, falling deeply in lust with one another until they can't resist anymore. Lose any mention or spot-on description of Muslim garb and just refer to it as full-body dresses, such as an Amish woman might wear. It's a fine idea, it will just need some creativity to get past the religion no-go when submitting the work.

 

[davion2308]

It's not a bad idea but it's in the execution. Take religion out, take the word 'slut' out (as was suggested at the top) and you may have something.

The word slut brings up a lot of negative emotions and feelings for a lot of people here. Someone discovering their sexuality, though, and feeling free from it is a completely different angle. Sure, she's new to sex and wants to try all of it but that's different from what we may picture when we hear the word slut.

 

[000zing]

You're missing the point that some people who come to this board, adopting a new alias each time, have a very definite "south Asian" agenda. Can you imagine the reaction people might get from stressing that it had to be a "white only, Christian" thing? It's time the mods started earning their keep and banning this sectional, semi-racist stuff.

Different colour skin is one thing. Ethnic, religious junk is entirely another.

 

[FantasySharer1]

It's silly because if they know enough about the culture they are talking about, they could just start using the expressions and vocabulary in the dialogue naturally and it wouldn't even be a problem.

They seem to want to come here and get specific advice on how they can sexually subject someone else's race/religion to their own personal supremacist fantasies.

 

[Rob_Royale]

It's silly because if they know enough about the culture they are talking about, they could just start using the expressions and vocabulary in the dialogue naturally and it wouldn't even be a problem.

They seem to want to come here and get specific advice on how they can sexually subject someone else's race/religion to their own personal supremacist fantasies.

On their very first post as well. This is just a troll looking to get folks spun up.

 

[urbabya]

I have an idea of a 18 year old muslim South Asian girl who's very religious wears a hijab and loose clothes. She goes to university and slowly becomes more westernised eventually she begins to get more curious. By the end of the story series she'd have her virginity taken by a virgin guy going through a similar thing, had explored with girls threesomes orgys etc. And finally helping a young guy lose his virginity now she is experienced

As one myself I love the idea!!

 

[sirhugs]

It's not a bad idea but it's in the execution. Take religion out, take the word 'slut' out (as was suggested at the top) and you may have something.

The word slut brings up a lot of negative emotions and feelings for a lot of people here. Someone discovering their sexuality, though, and feeling free from it is a completely different angle. Sure, she's new to sex and wants to try all of it but that's different from what we may picture when we hear the word slut.

I love the word "slut"

 

[TheArsonist]

The content guidelines ban "Works that promote or focus heavily on politics or religion, or political or religious figures."
You would need to make it cultural, not religious.

There are plenty of stories on the site where the characters' religion and its standards of modesty and chastity are a factor: stories about the families of vicars/pastors/priests could be a category in itself, for example, and of course you have the ever-popular nun stories. I don't see why a Muslim character would be any different.

As I understand the policy, it doesn't normally come into play unless the story starts arguing theology or promoting or attacking particular faiths.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I like the religious angle regardless of the faith.

When I was a young man there was a beautiful older black woman that was the manager of our local grocery store. She was heavily involved in her local church, wore a cross necklace everywhere. She dressed as demurely as she could but as a BBW there was only so much she could do to cover that wonderful body. Never heard a bad word spoken about her.

At some point my cousin went to work there and told me he'd fucked her and most of the young men there had too.

"The religious ones are real freaks," he said.

 

[Carnevil9]

The word Islam literally means "submission." So it isn't that much of a stretch that the highly-religious young lady stops submitting to Allah and starts submitting to the men of Pi Kappa Alpha.