Story idea, need feedback please!

[PaulBlart]

In real life, I have a temp secretary working for me after my secretary quit. I'm honestly not a guy who chases after women and certainly haven't seriously considered cheating on my wife. This woman, though, has a sultry, low voice, beautiful green eyes, long auburn hair and an ass so beautiful I can't take my eyes off it. Soooo, I'm thinking of writing about seducing her. Do you all think I should write one single story focusing on the culmination (my interest in her is purely physical) or a series about mutual seduction?

 

[jeninflorida]

Danger Will Robinson!

Writing a story might be what the Dr called for. This way you can avoid a real life sexual harassment!?!

You will have the freedom to say what you feel, do what you want to do, with out the moral/legal consequences of real life. Welcome to the forum, being!

 

[geronimo_appleby]

In real life, I have a temp secretary working for me after my secretary quit. I'm honestly not a guy who chases after women and certainly haven't seriously considered cheating on my wife. This woman, though, has a sultry, low voice, beautiful green eyes, long auburn hair and an ass so beautiful I can't take my eyes off it. Soooo, I'm thinking of writing about seducing her. Do you all think I should write one single story focusing on the culmination (my interest in her is purely physical) or a series about mutual seduction?

just write it. however it comes out.

 

[PaulBlart]

Thank you Jen. Yes, danger indeed. The attraction has fueled my imagination and I have so many ideas I'm having a little difficulty focusing it. The risk of sexual harassment, my marriage, and my position are all obvious conflicts in the story. I'm mostly trying to decide if this is a hot and sweaty one time thing on my desk or an ongoing, conflict ridden seduction with consequences. Any thoughts?

 

[wheelchairman85]

I say it should be an ongoing thing with lots of conflict.

 

[Carnevil9]

Just don't accidentally leave a copy in the printer at your office.

 

[jeninflorida]

Thank you Jen. Yes, danger indeed. The attraction has fueled my imagination and I have so many ideas I'm having a little difficulty focusing it. The risk of sexual harassment, my marriage, and my position are all obvious conflicts in the story. I'm mostly trying to decide if this is a hot and sweaty one time thing on my desk or an ongoing, conflict ridden seduction with consequences. Any thoughts?

You need to capture that emotion and passion…if you feel you can’t just try. The hardest word to write is the first. So get started. You can always correct it later or work with someone to make it better.

The key is to start.

Now you have an outlet for those sexual feelings and frustrations, which hopefully will spin out some hot erotica … maybe she will read it at home and take care of her needs?

 

[geronimo_appleby]

You need to capture that emotion and passion…if you feel you can’t just try. The hardest word to write is the first. So get started. You can always correct it later or work with someone to make it better.

The key is to start.

Now you have an outlet for those sexual feelings and frustrations, which hopefully will spin out some hot erotica … maybe she will read it at home and take care of her needs?

which is what i said.

 

[nakdsub]

Man, I second this...

Just don't accidentally leave a copy in the printer at your office.

I don't think I'd write it using the office computer either...or home computer for that matter...
How you thought of..."where you're going to write this?"

 

[sirhugs]

agree with those who say just start writing. you will soon sense if it is a self contained adventure, or requires sequels, because she either will do the seduction dance or swipe all the stuff of the desk & get at it...

 

[silverwhisper]

if your wife finds this and recognizes the object of desire, that's quite probably gonna become a problem.

while i know this is story ideas, i do wonder if writing about your attraction isn't instead going to have the opposite effect, of fetishizing the things you find attractive in her.

ed

 

[LordMhoram]

Caution Flag

In real life, I have a temp secretary working for me after my secretary quit. I'm honestly not a guy who chases after women and certainly haven't seriously considered cheating on my wife. {emphasis added}

If you want to keep it that way, walk away from this whole idea. Do not indulge in the fantasy. Do not dwell on it, and sure as hell don't write about it.

You are playing with fire, and taking a very real risk of giving yourself permission to play 'just this once'. You really are on thin ice.

Maybe you can pull it off (no pun intended) but is it worth the risk? If that doesn't bother you, write your story, and don't forget to post a link to it for us here.

If it was me, I'd focus all my energy on directing my thoughts elsewhere. Just sayin'.

 

[hotdamnazgirl]

If you want to keep it that way, walk away from this whole idea. Do not indulge in the fantasy. Do not dwell on it, and sure as hell don't write about it.

You are playing with fire, and taking a very real risk of giving yourself permission to play 'just this once'. You really are on thin ice.

Maybe you can pull it off (no pun intended) but is it worth the risk? If that doesn't bother you, write your story, and don't forget to post a link to it for us here.

If it was me, I'd focus all my energy on directing my thoughts elsewhere. Just sayin'.

This seems like some solid advice . . . you don't want to fan the flames and risk the fire getting out of control.

 

[BuckyDuckman]

For fuck's sake, dude, write the story and get it out of your system! I draw inspiration from people in real life all the time. There's no way I can fuck them all, but I sure as shit can write about fucking them. And in my stories, they are a sweet and innocent or sick and twisted as I need for them to be. So get to it, have some fun, post it for the rest of us to have some fun, and then get writing on a new story about that hottie working at the Dunkin' Doughnuts.