Story Idea Feedback Needed!

StarFem

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Hi everyone. I just wrote a romance story (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=56939) and I'm already thinking of another. But because this is a series-type story, I'd really appreciate any feedback on the idea before I dive into it.
It's basically the story of two best friends (guy and girl) who decide to take a trip around the world before they start their second year of college. This is at the suggestion of a teacher they share. Each segment would have them at a different place in the world, experiencing new things both touristy and sexually. I plan for a lot of description, also in both ways.
Any thoughts? I appreciate it!
:kiss:
 
I has a lot of potential. (And The HOT sex was well written too!!)

Nice to see a story with more plot than sex. Not that it didn't have a good sexy parts too. I can see several directions it could go in. I will be looking for future postings for sure!
 
The story has good plot, development and dialogue, and the sensual scenes are good too. Very well done and thank you, I enjoyed it greatly.
 
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