SiddyBoySahil
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Author: Aurelius1982
For me, this is the best Indian erotica of all time, the way Aurelius has described the character of Menaka is outstanding and very arousing. I just have one criticism of the story and that is the author didn't provide a proper ending, or rather things ended in a rush. Dara had total control over Menaka, this story deserves a better ending. Any talented author willing to take it up?
For me, this is the best Indian erotica of all time, the way Aurelius has described the character of Menaka is outstanding and very arousing. I just have one criticism of the story and that is the author didn't provide a proper ending, or rather things ended in a rush. Dara had total control over Menaka, this story deserves a better ending. Any talented author willing to take it up?
