I thought I have found an editor, but he didn't edit. My former editor was willing, but he hasn't time to edit right now. So I have to refresh my demand from end of Juni:
Category: Non Consent/Reluctance
Tags: domination, femdom, tease, seduction, control, temptation, orgasm control, humiliation, denial, CFNM
Karen 07: She don't accept the dress code
Even the principal is no match for her skills.
Looking for an editor: femdom, non consent / reluctant
I've finished the next story of the series "Karen". It is similar stuff as the other stories. If you like the first ones, I'm think, that you like this one too.
I'm not an English native, so I'm very unsure with many things: grammar, spell, using the words in a right way. I'm also interested in criticism of the plot and the pace and so on.
This time I struggled a lot finding the right words. I think, it is perhaps, that I wrote about a lot of clothing, that are often very special words, I'm not sure about.
I would like an editor, who like this kind of stories.
The story has 8872 words, 48480 characters. I suppose, that it will be 3 pages on Literotica.Thanks a lot!
LrseFauc
Category: Non Consent/Reluctance
Tags: domination, femdom, tease, seduction, control, temptation, orgasm control, humiliation, denial, CFNM
Karen 07: She don't accept the dress code
Even the principal is no match for her skills.
Looking for an editor: femdom, non consent / reluctant
I've finished the next story of the series "Karen". It is similar stuff as the other stories. If you like the first ones, I'm think, that you like this one too.
I'm not an English native, so I'm very unsure with many things: grammar, spell, using the words in a right way. I'm also interested in criticism of the plot and the pace and so on.
This time I struggled a lot finding the right words. I think, it is perhaps, that I wrote about a lot of clothing, that are often very special words, I'm not sure about.
I would like an editor, who like this kind of stories.
The story has 8872 words, 48480 characters. I suppose, that it will be 3 pages on Literotica.Thanks a lot!
LrseFauc
