Stepdaughter Fills In

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Chapter 4 is published.
looks like in ch. 5 Luna's Dad is going to get seduced. The beat goes on. If you HATE that idea let me know asap.
If you have suggestions about how it should happen, or what combinations should occur, please post here and I'll see if they fit (who knows, maybe they become Ch. 6?)

 

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Chapter 5 is unfolding... what sort of sex/combinations of characters should Luna's Dad (Raul) get involved with?

 

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Chapter 5 is unfolding... what sort of sex/combinations of characters should Luna's Dad (Raul) get involved with?

have structured the story and started to fill in sex scenes (a different approach for me). Limited time for requests as to how I can keep the fivesome fun.

 

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still a few days work left to flesh out chapter 5 but already thinking chapter 6.
What do you think?
Possibilities I have thought of so far:
a) Linda and Luna swap for a weekend (kinda repetitive of chapter 5)
b) Linda brings a boyfriend home
c)Linda and Daddy go on a college tour (does Luna go along?)
or... [your idea here]
I started this as a freestanding story, but Linda has a life of her own, and Luna is a sweetie

 

[KindredFlame]

I must admit I like c. I am not sure about the third wheel though

 

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Still finishing up chapter 5. Trying to overcome my own fear of fivesomes (fear of being left out).
Still not 100% committed to chapter 6, but no other idea in the hopper awaiting. . Need a good idea that fits the "fills in" theme (though chapter 5 drifts rather far from it).

 

[KimAwakened]

Should there be a ch. 3?
I wrote Chapter 2 as the logical conclusion to the story, started in Chapter 1 but could investigate these characters further.
But having exhausted the typical sex acts between stepdad and stepdaughter (and mom), how do I avoid repetition?
Why does the stepdaughter fill in again?
where does she fill in? A business trip? A convention? A wedding? Something else?
Or should I just move on?

My highlights.

I can never see the point in stretching out a story purely for the sake of it.

Why do you need a multi-chaptered epic if the idea itself has already been well and truly milked? I'm aware that many writers I've spoken with view erotica literature's natural home, genre-wise, as being in the short story category, The more I read and think about it, the more I'm inclined to agree

 

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My highlights.

I can never see the point in stretching out a story purely for the sake of it.

Why do you need a multi-chaptered epic if the idea itself has already been well and truly milked? I'm aware that many writers I've spoken with view erotica literature's natural home, genre-wise, as being in the short story category, The more I read and think about it, the more I'm inclined to agree

Ch 3 is done & polling well. So is Chapter 4. Chapter 5, the longest thus far, is almost complete. I have had requests for more. I still like the characters, so could enjoy writing more about them, just not sure how to stay on theme...

 

[KimAwakened]

So write different stories for these characters. Why try to force them into one protracted narrative where you strain artificially to link it all? I just don't understand the logic.

Does the whole thing make one logical story or have you ended up with separate so-called "chapters" which in reality are spin-offs or sequels?

 

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So write different stories for these characters. Why try to force them into one protracted narrative where you strain artificially to link it all? I just don't understand the logic.

Does the whole thing make one logical story or have you ended up with separate so-called "chapters" which in reality are spin-offs or sequels?

With the possible exception of Chapter 3, there is a sequence and attempt at continuity in the stories that rewards readers who are familiar with earlier chapters. Whether it is logical, I leave to others to judge.

 

[Reenigam]

erotica literature's natural home, genre-wise, as being in the short story category, The more I read and think about it, the more I'm inclined to agree

Amen to that. Completely agree.

Mind you, that sort of fits with my frustration with longer things. My thoughts are always firing off in other directions and I feel the need to start something new. Inability to concentrate and focus is probably what you'd call it!

 

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drafting of chapter 5 is done, my best effort at revising. ready to go to the editor.
What next?

 

[KindredFlame]

My wife who is the love of my life has always end satisfied my lust, however to find out that since her miscarriage her enjoyment of our sexual depravity left me feeling cold. To think my sexual desires were hurting my loverly wife. This was the start of my looking for a lustful partner to give my wife the restbite she so deserves

 

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My wife who is the love of my life has always end satisfied my lust, however to find out that since her miscarriage her enjoyment of our sexual depravity left me feeling cold. To think my sexual desires were hurting my loverly wife. This was the start of my looking for a lustful partner to give my wife the restbite she so deserves

I just love the word "loverly".

 

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My wife who is the love of my life has always end satisfied my lust, however to find out that since her miscarriage her enjoyment of our sexual depravity left me feeling cold. To think my sexual desires were hurting my loverly wife. This was the start of my looking for a lustful partner to give my wife the restbite she so deserves

is this true, or part of the fiction?

 

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My wife who is the love of my life has always end satisfied my lust, however to find out that since her miscarriage her enjoyment of our sexual depravity left me feeling cold. To think my sexual desires were hurting my loverly wife. This was the start of my looking for a lustful partner to give my wife the restbite she so deserves

I also love the non-word "restbite" [in place of "respite"]. I'd love to give you a rest bite. Or any sort of bite... I'm a nibbler...

 

[KindredFlame]

I just love the word "loverly".

is this true, or part of the fiction?

It was a way to add another version of your story oh masterful Sir. Aggggggghhhhhhhhj. She said as the tiny strands of his latest toy cut into her arse

 

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but back to the topic... where to go next?
do I even continue the series?
Do I bring back one or more of the poker buddies for a guest appearance?
Do I build on Raul or Luna or both?
Do I introduce Raul's wife (Luna's mom or Stepmom?)
Do I introduce a boyfriend?
Do I explore/invent Jessica's extramarital sex life (hinted at or implied in earlier episodes), now that "Daddy" has gotten off watching her with Raul?
Do you have other suggestions?
How do I keep from wandering too far off the "fills in" theme?

So many possibilities... where is my muse when I need it?

 

[KindredFlame]

I also love the non-word "restbite" [in place of "respite"]. I'd love to give you a rest bite. Or any sort of bite... I'm a nibbler...

I was half asleep when I typed it last night I only posted it this morning without checking it. oh forgive me master.

 

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I was half asleep when I typed it last night I only posted it this morning without checking it. oh forgive me master.

why forgive something I loved?

 

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Gave some thought to having Jessica over at Raul's "filling in" for his wife while that wife "fills in" for Jessica.
not sure how Linda & Luna work in, if at all.
Not sure how to keep it fresh rather than a pale reimagining of chapter 2 or 4 or 5.

back to the drawing board?

 

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Chapter 5 has now been posted. I hope you enjoy.

Still not sure about Ch6 , even if there will be one. I previously posted some possibilities:
Do I bring back one or more of the poker buddies for a guest appearance?
Do I build on Raul or Luna or both?
Do I introduce Raul's wife (Luna's mom or Stepmom?)
Do I introduce a boyfriend?
Do I explore/invent Jessica's extramarital sex life (hinted at or implied in earlier episodes), now that "Daddy" has gotten off watching her with Raul?

Gave some thought to having Jessica over at Raul's "filling in" for his wife while that wife "fills in" for Jessica.
not sure how Linda & Luna work in, if at all, which is kinda important in a chapter of a "Stepdaughter" story.
Not sure how to keep it fresh rather than a pale reimagining of chapter 2 or 4 or 5.
I have a couple of others in the pipeline, but as you can tell, this "world" is still on my mind.

 

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Chapter 5 is getting mediocre scores (i.e. less than a red "H") , with no comments, and as usually happens with a series, declining readership.

The time has come to ask whether this series has run its course.

What do you think?

 

[KindredFlame]

I can honestly say my daughter stepped in for me tonight. Wife is in London wanted me to get dressed up like a dogs dinner. I don’t like these things and not fond of London either. So I sent my daughter instead. She looks a lot better in a posh frock than me.

 

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I can honestly say my daughter stepped in for me tonight. Wife is in London wanted me to get dressed up like a dogs dinner. I don’t like these things and not fond of London either. So I sent my daughter instead. She looks a lot better in a posh frock than me.

evil bitch. I love it.