Step Dad/Daughter Stories Based on my Own Experiences - Feedback, Please?

[redheadfantasy]

Hello all,

I’m working on a story series based on my own experiences with my step dad. I want to be a stronger writer, and I would really appreciate any constructive criticism. Thanks! <3

https://www.literotica.com/s/chapter-1-becoming-daddys-girl

https://www.literotica.com/s/chapter-2-becoming-daddys-girl

 

[OnlyHappyEndings]

You write well but both stories made me very uncomfortable and not in a sexy way. I'm sorry if this really happened to you.