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[Jimpster]

long time reader, first attempt. Got couple of chapters under my belt, my question is is there anywhere i can post it without it going "live" for feedback, editing etc.

thanks for any replies - its and incest story and will run poss to approx 6 chapters, i have it all roughly planned and know where its going - just looking for a yay or nay on my style, before going any further, or give it up as a bad job LOL

 

[robertreams]

need a link

 

[robertreams]

send it to an editor

 

[Sammael Bard]

You can ask for feedback on the Forums for a story only if you have it posted on Literotica. Do not post links to other websites.

Also, try the Editor's Forum to find someone who can help you with your story.


Good Luck.