Space Contest Voting Thread 2
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TheDR4KE
Space
Insufficient space
to express
what I need to express:
myself
My self.
Thoughts and ideas,
urges, memories and blood:
aflame
A flame.
Fire of passion
burns in the
nothing.
No thing.
I am not what I express
but from where it comes:
space
Space
Insufficient space
to express
what I need to express:
myself
My self.
Thoughts and ideas,
urges, memories and blood:
aflame
A flame.
Fire of passion
burns in the
nothing.
No thing.
I am not what I express
but from where it comes:
space
WickedEve
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d7dlp0
Space,
It's all alone mine.
It is my microcosm
where "I" take place.
We are all born with it.
Forever unable to misplace it.
It's the place where, emotionally,
I store my baggage.
Proving true, THAT old tired addage.
Space, It truly will be
My final frontier.
Space,
It's all alone mine.
It is my microcosm
where "I" take place.
We are all born with it.
Forever unable to misplace it.
It's the place where, emotionally,
I store my baggage.
Proving true, THAT old tired addage.
Space, It truly will be
My final frontier.
WickedEve
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Angeline
Spaced Out
Sun Ra said that space is the place.
He got that right.
Space is the place where I’d like to be.
Uncluttered and peaceful I’m free:
put up my feet, spread my papers and books
Not have to put up with those looks.
You know what I mean?
J’accuse, Mommie Dearest!
Get outta my way! That’s where
I’m playing with Legos today.
Ok. So the couch then. Nope,
I guess not; Barbie lives there,
and the little snot with the body
has more clothes than me:
Barbie couture from Dior and Gucci!
If I try to sit at the other end,
Oh the things with which my poor
Tushy must fend. Very small shoes
In plastic, by dozens, designed for
Barbie and her forty odd cousins,
Demented toddlers, most with no hair,
Looking slightly befouled they await
The stray foot at the top of the stair.
Maybe the kitchen is where I can be
But one look and I’m bitchin because
I see dead juice boxes
Scattered about, empty cheese stick
Wrappers and close by the snout
Of my dog, O God help me
Another small shoe, which I
Wrestle away before she can chew.
I flee to the bathroom.
Just give me some space! But what
Do I see in my last hiding place?
The final frontier? Peering up
From the top of the hamper
All slick and agleam:
The “Get Organized Catalogue”
And all I can think as around me
My world continues to shrink is
In space, no one can hear you scream.
Spaced Out
Sun Ra said that space is the place.
He got that right.
Space is the place where I’d like to be.
Uncluttered and peaceful I’m free:
put up my feet, spread my papers and books
Not have to put up with those looks.
You know what I mean?
J’accuse, Mommie Dearest!
Get outta my way! That’s where
I’m playing with Legos today.
Ok. So the couch then. Nope,
I guess not; Barbie lives there,
and the little snot with the body
has more clothes than me:
Barbie couture from Dior and Gucci!
If I try to sit at the other end,
Oh the things with which my poor
Tushy must fend. Very small shoes
In plastic, by dozens, designed for
Barbie and her forty odd cousins,
Demented toddlers, most with no hair,
Looking slightly befouled they await
The stray foot at the top of the stair.
Maybe the kitchen is where I can be
But one look and I’m bitchin because
I see dead juice boxes
Scattered about, empty cheese stick
Wrappers and close by the snout
Of my dog, O God help me
Another small shoe, which I
Wrestle away before she can chew.
I flee to the bathroom.
Just give me some space! But what
Do I see in my last hiding place?
The final frontier? Peering up
From the top of the hamper
All slick and agleam:
The “Get Organized Catalogue”
And all I can think as around me
My world continues to shrink is
In space, no one can hear you scream.
WickedEve
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lickmyboot
my space contribution
Hee! Hee! Here's my Star Trek *Pooku
tricorder reading
Bones squatting, fingers probing
sourly, "He's dead, Jim."
*please note this description was coined by someone infinitely more creative than myself on another thread spouting off definitions of haiku--for those literalist bogged in symantics, I offer this...all my 'haiku' is pooku.
Thanku
lickmyboot
my space contribution
Hee! Hee! Here's my Star Trek *Pooku
tricorder reading
Bones squatting, fingers probing
sourly, "He's dead, Jim."
*please note this description was coined by someone infinitely more creative than myself on another thread spouting off definitions of haiku--for those literalist bogged in symantics, I offer this...all my 'haiku' is pooku.
Thanku
lickmyboot
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_Land
The Look of your uncaring face
Lines of hatred deeply set
Stinging words, bitterness
all that’s left
Ten long years
pain and treachery
what is love
nothing given
I’m tired
lonely
deep in need
trapped in some twilight zone of marital bliss
Goodbye bitch
what’s left to say
get lost
I’m though with you
I pack my bags
I go out the door
Finding freedom
drifting space
The Look of your uncaring face
Lines of hatred deeply set
Stinging words, bitterness
all that’s left
Ten long years
pain and treachery
what is love
nothing given
I’m tired
lonely
deep in need
trapped in some twilight zone of marital bliss
Goodbye bitch
what’s left to say
get lost
I’m though with you
I pack my bags
I go out the door
Finding freedom
drifting space
WickedEve
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Nomadic Lady
there is vast space above me
each shimmer of the stars
puts a smile on my face
there is a need for my space
where I go to grow
puts a smile on my face
there is a space that yearns for you
come my love
put a smile on my face
there is vast space above me
each shimmer of the stars
puts a smile on my face
there is a need for my space
where I go to grow
puts a smile on my face
there is a space that yearns for you
come my love
put a smile on my face
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