daughter
Dreamer
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Homer--
Love what you do with forms. So how do you enhance a good thing going? I'd look at your vocabulary and imagery. Ick to cliches like 'passion'. Yeah, I'm guilty of the same. Already, I know you favorite words. Yep, I'm there with you on that one, too.
Friends and mentors have encouraged me to change up my reading habits. Look to different poets to stimulate new images and for a source of new words. On my current to read list: Galway Kinnell, Sharon Olds, and Neruda. I love their writing and I'm a long way from their skill. That's the idea. Gives me something to aspire to. Okay, in my dreams I know.
Can't hate a girl for dreaming though.
Great read. You the man.
For those interested in checking out a good read:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=27846
Peace,
daughter
p.s. How about a title? "Sonnet" just doesn't get the juices flowing.
Love what you do with forms. So how do you enhance a good thing going? I'd look at your vocabulary and imagery. Ick to cliches like 'passion'. Yeah, I'm guilty of the same. Already, I know you favorite words. Yep, I'm there with you on that one, too.
Friends and mentors have encouraged me to change up my reading habits. Look to different poets to stimulate new images and for a source of new words. On my current to read list: Galway Kinnell, Sharon Olds, and Neruda. I love their writing and I'm a long way from their skill. That's the idea. Gives me something to aspire to. Okay, in my dreams I know.
Can't hate a girl for dreaming though.Great read. You the man.
For those interested in checking out a good read:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=27846
Peace,
daughter
p.s. How about a title? "Sonnet" just doesn't get the juices flowing.
