Some help please?

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I am currently working on a spin off for Celuna's Hunt. It is with a secondary character, Jacques. He is an older more mature Loupa (werewolf).

He has just left his Alpha pair in the woods doing what comes naturally and he's feeling lonely and depressed. Suddenly a young woman runs into him. She knocks him over and keeps running. There is something hunting her and Jacques can sense it. He's the Beta of the city and its his job to investigate this sort of thing.

The girl, Mahrae, is actually a college student from the surrounding area. She is Loupa but she's not aware of it. She's being chased by another Loupa.

The problem is, it has sort of fizzled out after their literal first run it. I'm not sure how to get them together a second time. He's tracking her but I don't know how to get them together again and how to put her pursuers in the mix.

Can anyone give me some suggestions?

Hrefna

 

[Chicklet]

It sounds like you have something very interesting going on here. I don't think I could make any suggestions without reading the story, though = ( and I'm reluctant to offer since I've failed many times to follow through with such promises. (see's sirhugs glaring in the background)

A couple of ideas for you and finding more help, though: When such things have happened to me I have previously headed for the "Story Feedback" section and asked for help. People offer to help read my stories and then give me possibilities. You might head there.

And the Author's Hangout; don't discount the helpfulness of real live authors = )

This is a good forum too, and I'm not saying that no one will help you out from here. Just trying to help you get the most.

Chicklet

 

[Un-registered]

And the Author's Hangout; don't discount the helpfulness of real live authors = )

Only dead authors on here then IYHO?

 

[Chicklet]

Only dead authors on here then IYHO?

= )

lotsa live authors here, dead one's too (cough cough chicklet cough cough)