small regrets submiting, can it be fixed?

[pointless]

i recently submitted my first story to lit, and, while it's done better than i thought it would (4.4 so far), i've noticed that it has some significant flawes.

i'm currently working on the next part, but i was wondering if there is any way to fix the problem's with the first even though its already out there floating around in cyberspace? can i just repost it after sending it to an editor?

could i just throw in with the next couple parts i have planned on paper and which i am beginning to type out now? is that inappropriate?

any help would be greatly appreciated.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=82777

 

[Guest]

Laurel is soooo helpful

Been there, done that.

Resubmit the story with the same title followed by EDITED.

 

[pointless]

groovy

thank you very much.

 

[Guest]

and....

Congratulations on your first story doing so well!

Well done!

b

 

[pointless]

thanks, but i think it was subject more than the story.

 

[Chicklet]

thanks, but i think it was subject more than the story.

i disagree and i never want to hear such modesty out of your mouth again!

 

[pointless]

thank you, but i was well trained by methodists, so the modesty is there no matter what.

unless your baptist. then i have to inform you that i'm better than you. them's the rules.