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Point of View

I read the first few threads of your story "The Book". I have a question on the point of view as I am still trying to figure it out. It seems like you have both 2nd person and 3rd person POV mixed together in the first few threads.

Can anyone straighten me out as to what I am missing if this is all 2nd person?

Just trying to figure it out.

Thanks.
 
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