''Sliding Door'' Kansas style!

[Guest]

Have you already heard about the waitress from Kansas finding 3G in the restaurant where she works and honestly handing the cash in even though she is 15G in debt due to paying for her baby's medical care? Now, she is flooded with well-wish letters and money sent.

How about a story of a waitress making right and wrong descision and from there 2 stories run in sync.

Right descision leads to romance/erotic direction. The wrong one goes BDSM/non-con.

It was a nice news to hear to start the day.

 

[jakelyon]

Chyoo?

Seems like that would be a good story to post on CHYOO. It is perfect for the alternative angles that you want to explore.

 

[Chicklet]

i like a straight out story posted on lit better than a chyoo story, PERSONALLY.

ChilledVodka, how would you propose writing this story? I can see a couple different things.

1) the author writes the two side by side, two paragraphs of one story and then two of the other.

2) the author writes one alternative all the way through, then writes the second alternative.

3) two authors collaborate; one writes one scenario one writes the other.

This might be an interesting chain story.

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

i like a straight out story posted on lit better than a chyoo story, PERSONALLY.
Chyhoo angle might be interesting, but I'd think one auther working on it would be better in terms of style, skill, characterisation, etc.

ChilledVodka, how would you propose writing this story? I can see a couple different things.
Could be difficult, couldn't it. Writing a story is no the same as writing a movie screen play.

1) the author writes the two side by side, two paragraphs of one story and then two of the other.
I've read jon.heyworth doing this. He carried out quite well, but it was a form of two jumbled diaries.

2) the author writes one alternative all the way through, then writes the second alternative.
I think this won't work. It's better to write two totally different characters with one key set-up: i.e. right and wrong choices (I'm such a moralist, today.lol)

3) two authors collaborate; one writes one scenario one writes the other.
A head to head competition angle, I like.
Dixon Carter Lee vs KillerMuffin(DCL is too lazy, prolly)
Couture vs The SandsMan
Jigs vs HornyPaki
etc.

This might be an interesting chain story.
Mibe.

Chicklet [/B]

 

[Chicklet]

Movie Screenplay

Actually I've been playing around with writing a story in that style; think it'd get totally slammed?

Chicklet

 

[Guest]

Go ahead. Make my day.