Silent Orgasm

Pulling back so only the controllable tip of his cock is in her mouth might be a clue she's about to lose control, especially if she suddenly grips him with rather firm force. Some sharp intakes of breath might be a clue, and/or tensing of her leg, perhaps pressing harder along his side.
 
Thanks for the help everyone! I've got that part of the scene worked out to my satisfaction.
 
Depends on the details, but momentarily being unable to continue speaking (if she's in a conversation) would be one way. Heavy breathing is a classic, or holding her breath for 15 seconds or whatever. Muscle clenching, say accidentally squeezing something (a paper coffee cup?) too hard. A few delicate drops of perspiration on the brow? A few delicate drops of perspiration on the panties?

I never wrote it, but one of my story ideas would have had a naive person think the heroine was having a seizure because her muscles clenched, she stopped breathing for a little while ....

-Annie
How about having her cum so hard that her eyes roll back? The writer suggesting shes is about to pass out from pleasure/ overstimulation?
 
The same things that happen, when somebody is vocal. I've never wrote somebody who's quiet, or fairly quiet when they climax. I didn't think anybody would like it.
 
I'm reminded of a Catholic girl I fooled around with in college. Definitely virgin, and probably never had her pants down with a guy before either. Like, later on I found out she literally didn't know what the wet stuff drooling out of her was.

Anyway, there she was, above me on all fours, making out with my face, rubbing her bare chest on mine, and I was reaching up the leg of her shorts. The lubrication was copious and my fingers were sliding through it between her labia, tracing circles around her swollen clit with it, delicately penetrating into where it was coming from... And she was LOSING CONTROL. Completely voiceless but huffing and puffing like a bellows. Squirming like a catnip-intoxicated panther, wringing her eyes shut until tears came out, mouth open and pouting as her breath whipsawed in and out.

Not a squeak of vocalization the whole time, but she panted herself raw. Later that day her roommate noticed how hoarse she was, and didn't believe us when we said she hadn't been screaming with pleasure.
 
I usually go overboard on the vocalizations. Recently, I have tried a few times to describe a silent orgasm. Not truly happy yet, but I view this as an interesting writing challenge. Especially since vocalizations are one of my kinks.
 
I'd go with some sort of body movement: the hips or pelvis lifting off the bed, moving faster or harder. The legs stretch out rapidly, like you are trying to push your feet on something. The body shudders, shakes, or wiggles.
to me that is the PERFECT response
 
Honestly, I know what it feels like to orgasm silently, I had to learn how to vocalize when I'm cumming or my partners didn't believe it. But I'm trying to write a scene right now with a girl that silently orgasms, and I want to leave some subtle clues for the observant reader that she's cumming. But outside of the screaming and moaning and full body jerks, which are all short hand for cumming, how do I do so?
I can cum quietly, especially when I’m being discreet. But I cannot hide my eyes water and nose runs. I have to sniff 😊
 
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