Hi, I am attempting to write a chapter of one of my series that primarily will be a Shibari session with a housewife/business woman. This is the first time I've done this, but I'm wondering if anyone out there familiar with Shibari would be willing to read the chapter (not sure how long it's going to end up) and give me some feedback, as in is it total trash or can it be redeemed somehow, if so, perhaps a little advice to make it seem as if I have some idea what I'm talking about. My only experience is watching numerous videos on Youtube and trying to model a session after some of those videos. HELP, Please! Full credit will be given, along with my eternal gratitude!