I don't know . . . I'll let it marinate in the back of my mind for a while and see if I can turn it into a plot. Right now I'm working on two new chapters of Horner Springs Institute and am thinking about another chapter of Midsummerfest. And this is in addition to starting a business!
Bear, I used this feedback in my NaNo story a few years back and it is an awesome way to show the emotions of two lovers.
I need to get back on that story at some point. I lost the original except for the very first section which is posted here on Lit. My laptop was stolen on a Thanksgiving vacation.