Sexual implausibilities.

Many of my stories, maybe even the majority, include anal sex and I always describe the application of lube and slow penetration. Besides that, the person being fucked will always reach back to spread their ass cheeks. That's because I believe that's the way it's usually done, even if he or she has had a lot of cocks in there. One exception might be if two men are taking turns, the second one can get in faster because it's already spread open enough. Even though I write fantasy stroke stories, I want the action to be plausible.

Implausible actions really bug me about movies or videotapes, though. Some guy who is really hung will come up behind a woman, give a push, and it's all the way in, no lube, not even spit. So often, I will see a man fucking a woman and he stops, pulls it out, and masturbates until he squirts cum on her back or belly, depending on where he is. I can't imagine anybody actually doing that unless it is to practice withdrawal as a form of birth control and, somehow, I don't believe that is the intention. I know it's so the film makers can include a "money shot" but I think it's silly.

Sometimes he masturbates and squirts on her face. I can't imagine any woman putting up with that either and, if It ever happens in a story that I'm writing, she will punch him in the balls for doing such a rotten thing. Actually, I am going to write a story where that happens and, after Cindy Lou punches him, she runs into the bathroom to wash it out of her eyes because it is burning them.

I did write a story once where she is sucking him off and, just as she is ready to cum, she takes it out of her mouth so it squirts on her nipples. Then she licks it off them, because this is her preference. Even in a titfuck, the woman raises her head so she will get the head of his cock in her mouth when he cums.
 
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Boxlicker101 said:
So often, I will see a man fucking a woman and he stops, pulls it out, and masturbates until he squirts cum on her back or belly, depending on where he is. I can't imagine anybody actually doing that...

Oh, it's done all right. You may not be able to imagine it, but that doesn't mean it's implausible.
 
Aurora Black said:
Oh, it's done all right. You may not be able to imagine it, but that doesn't mean it's implausible.
Even though I don't have the wild experiences of many here, I've done it too. It's just so weird how people have these preconceptions and aren't able to accept the possiblity that someone else likes it differently than they do. I'm not picking on you, Box, I've seen a lot of posts from people who say something can't be done or that the way it's described is "wrong", even though I've done it (or at least seen it done). That's nothing compared to the Public Comment sections.

It's one of the frustrating parts of writing for me. I work so hard on a piece, then have someone tell me I'm wrong about something or that it's not realistic. I also get people who decide my character is "brain dead" for making a bad choice, then downgrade the story because they wouldn't have made the same choice (something they can say for certain while siting in front of the computer with their dick in their hand). Sorry ladies, I don't mean to exclude you, but most of my stupid comments come from guys.

I think that's why I'm stuck on the new one. I know I've got it right, but I also know I'll get beaten up for things that are "implausible". After going through a 70,000 word story a hundred times, I'm just ready to scream. I've been back two days and I'm already feeling like another vacation. :rolleyes:
 
Boxlicker101 said:
Besides that, the person being fucked will always reach back to spread their ass cheeks. That's because I believe that's the way it's usually done, even if he or she has had a lot of cocks in there.
Interresting how different even two authors can view what is plausible or not.

I'll be the first to admit that my experiences with anal sex, first hand or close enough to know what I'm talking about, can be counted on one hand, but said spreading never occured.
 
Another implausibility that bugs me, is stamina. Both male and female, but mostly male. It's another area that varies from person to person. But if a guy can go at it for hours without rest, shoot a load and be at it again in five minutes, people are going to raise objections. The idea of a lover that doesn't squirt and roll over to sleep within the time frame of a cigarette is nice. But har far can you push the concept before it gets cliché?

In the stroke-ier side of the sex story swamp, you'll often find passages like "The three men banged her silly all night long. It wasn't until sunrise that she finally passed out from her twenty millionth mind blowing orgasm, covered from head to toe in cum." I mean seriously, how much yoghurt can a pair of nuts produce?

And the second question, but that belongs in a different discussion: Why is "covered from head to toe in cum" a turn-on for some? Feh.
 
Liar said:
And the second question, but that belongs in a different discussion: Why is "covered from head to toe in cum" a turn-on for some? Feh.
I know...it's like ICK!!!

I'm good with the stamina, even at 40 I can be ready in five minutes (I don't know if that's common or weird), but what about her? I've seen what you're talking about with a woman being fucked to unconsciousness all the time. I've never been involved in an all night gang-bang, but it seems pretty impossible. I'll reserve judgement, though. I'm sure there is someone out there who not only has done it, but thinks it's a swell time.
 
Unbirth

One of my 5-Lit page stories, The Virgin Unbirth, involves a woman unbirthing several people at once.

Unbirthing even a very small person is physically impossible.

The only significant criticism made of my original draft is that I should have had some explanation of the conservation of mass - in a story that is obviously impossible!

I rewrote it to include a fake explanation of how the mass of the unbirthed bodies was reduced and then replaced. The unbirth experts pronounced themselves satisfied.

Unbirthing is still impossible...

Og

PS. Any comments on The Virgin Unbirth would be appreciated. I think the 5 Lit pages have deterred readers.
 
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