Hello everyone,
Here's a thread in case people would like to share and discuss feedback about my first story.
Senior Year Chapter 1
It's a series with multiple chapters. The series itself is still pending moderation, I'll update the link once I have it.
I've created this thread because I'm interested in constructive criticism, like text construction (I'm not a native speaker), pacing, potential plot holes I might have missed, etc.
Also my story relies on the POV of the narrator only, so readers might have some questions about stuff hows and whys.
While my protagonist ignores some of the details, and I think it adds to the thrill when you don't know everything. Those details have been thought over and I can answer those questions if you have any.
Here's a thread in case people would like to share and discuss feedback about my first story.
Senior Year Chapter 1
It's a series with multiple chapters. The series itself is still pending moderation, I'll update the link once I have it.
I've created this thread because I'm interested in constructive criticism, like text construction (I'm not a native speaker), pacing, potential plot holes I might have missed, etc.
Also my story relies on the POV of the narrator only, so readers might have some questions about stuff hows and whys.
While my protagonist ignores some of the details, and I think it adds to the thrill when you don't know everything. Those details have been thought over and I can answer those questions if you have any.
