Self-rightous SOB

[lexium]

Getting Even

Here is a potential story. Please tell me what you think. Neighbor turns up her nose at a woman who is only trying to be nice. The neighbor begins to spread rumors around the neighborhood about the woman and her daughter. The woman decides to get even. The neighbor ( a self-rightous woman) has a thing for the postman. To get even, the woman gets the postman to setup the neighbor, so she is caught on video tape. The woman shows the entire neighborhood the video tape with the neighbors knowledge. I would like to see a story like that for different situations concerning the self-rightous.

 

[Tatewaki]

Re: Getting Even

I would like to see a story like that for different situations concerning the self-righteous.

Lexium;

Here is a story scene from a serial in progress called "Synder & Ashe" I'm working on. The idea failed to excite the woman I'm writing for, so it was deep-sixed. Perhaps you could do something with it.

POV character goes to a PTA meeting for her kids. Goes in full slave gear under her London Fog trenchcoat. She has been commanded to orally service the first person, male or female, that annoys her. This ends up being a fat bitchy woman with a shrill voice, the wife of a local pastor. They've run into each other before and have had words. Pastor's wife objects to the open way POV character is raising her children.

Pastor's wife is seduced and licked off in a classroom on the teachers desk. She had a feeling that Pastor's wife's constant shrewishness due to unfulfilled desires, wicked thoughts, submerged Bi tendencies. She strikes out against those who remind her of her own weakness. POV character's master takes photos from the doorway. A few of the printed digital pics will be emailed to the woman so she is forced to do POV's character's bidding, and to stop poisoning neighbours against her children. The threat: "These will be all over the net, along with your husband's name and address of his congregation if you don't keep your fucking mouth shut." Pastor's wife becomes POV character's tongue slave.

 

[lexium]

Re: Re: Getting Even

Yes...that sounds like her, but with outright hatefulness from the witch. The slave thing, I'm not into...but catching her is the cure. Having the POV turn her into the town's whore is what I would like to read about.

 

[Cipher]

Ohhhh

Ohhhhhh..This could be a story I could really be into..LoL
Gotta love those "Holier than thou" people and they're just as freaky as the person they point their noses at..Hmmm Someone get to writin that story with the preacher's wife LoL I agree with the person that said no slave play..I'm not into that either..but seriously..Someone write that story and have that preachers wife making late night visits to the men and women in the congregation for "prayer"..LoL Good ideas my friends!!
Cipher

 

[lexium]

Re: Ohhhh

..Someone write that story and have that preachers wife making late night visits to the men and women in the congregation for "prayer"..LoL Good ideas my friends!!
Cipher

Maybe she is doing the intired congregation and everyone thinks she is only cheating on her preacher husband with them.

 

[Cipher]

Lexium,
U know what..That would be a good story..Then have someone tape their session without her knowing and then the person that taped it show another person that she slept with and create a scandal only she can sleep her way out of..Now that's a good ass story..LoL
Cipher

 

[Tatewaki]

How long do you picture this story as running? Seems to be an awful lot of material being packed into the storyline ...

-T

 

[Cipher]

T,
I don't know..Maybe do it in 3 parts..Don't want it to be super long and super dragged out..I have no talent to write erotica..I would give it a shot..but I'd skrew up the whole story LoL
Cipher

 

[Tatewaki]

Do you see the Pastor's Wife as a filthy slut putting on airs, or is she forced to become one as penance for her harsh tratment of the POV character?

That is, was she a slut before, or merely having an affair with one other person, then is forced to screw everybody?

-T

 

[Tatewaki]

Anyone else have some ideas for the plot? I'd like to hear them.

-T

 

[lexium]

That is, was she a slut before, or merely having an affair with one other person, then is forced to screw everybody?

-T

In this case, POV secretly convinces the next member of the church to catch the witch and blackmail her for sex. The witch must be desperate to maintain her status in the church. Each event makes a different story. POV becomes the narrator. POV also document all events.

 

[Tatewaki]

Lexium;

A secret shared by many is called Common Knowldge. How to get around the Pastor's Wife's cover being blown, and her infidelities discovered by her husband? Once that happens, POV loses her leverage and the game is over.

BTW, are we still using the postman idea, or is that over and done with?

Also, what "evil" would you wish to see the Pastor's Wife perform? It almost sounds like you have a real life model in mind, Lexium ...

-T

 

[lexium]

Also, what "evil" would you wish to see the Pastor's Wife perform? It almost sounds like you have a real life model in mind, Lexium ...

-T

You guessed,

I've had some dealings with a neighbor. She walks funny due to the stick that is stuck up her ass. I generally try to stay out of my neighbors' business for obvious reasons (seen my profile?). The noisy witch had to have been in an uncommon place to look into my back yard. My daughter and a friend were going at on our panic table in the backyard. We have an eight-foot privacy fence around our yard and tall hedges. We also have five large trees, so you would have to go through some trouble to see in our yard. This witch told another neighbor, whom I talk to from time to time, what she saw. This is troubling, because we often use our backyard for various activities. I do get vindictive when my family is threatened. I feel sorry for her husband. She acts like one of those people who can only have sex once a month at a regularly scheduled time. I was thinking about fucking her husband. He seems to go out of his way to speek to me when ever I'm out front. I really had no intention of getting envolve with our neighbors, but I can't have an intrudsion on my family life. I'm sure that she was shocked at what she must have seen, knowing my daughter , but she is spreading it around. I try to post stories on Lit. although, I'm not a good writer. I want this witch to really get hers, and be there to see it.

 

[Tatewaki]

You guessed, I've had some dealings with a neighbor. She walks funny due to the stick that is stuck up her ass.

<SNIP!>

I want this witch to really get hers, and be there to see it.

Lexium;

Nothing tickles my fancy more than a tale of revenge! Would you rather ditch the Pastor's Wife angle and have me write one based on your own personal experiences, and the way you'd like it to pan out? Names can be changed to protect the guilty!

PM me if you are interested.

Warmest,

-T

 

[lexium]

Only if you like tales of incest.

 

[Tatewaki]

Only if you like tales of incest.

I don't not like them! Some of the hottest stories around are incest tales. Lord knows that on Lit, that is the most popular category by far.

-T

 

[lexium]

I've tried to write a few. I posted them on Lit. Tiggs would have a heart-attack if she tried to read them It includes: lack of proof reading; misspellings; improper word usage; the works. I have, however received a lot of responses from them. I think its around 25 or so. I'm pretty sure that I couldn't right this story. I want to go over and rip her eyeballs out. Noisy witch!

If you like, I'll spill it and you can write. I really hate reading over my stories. They are never as good to me as when I write them.

 

[Tatewaki]

I've tried to write a few. I posted them on Lit. Tiggs would have a heart-attack if she tried to read them It includes: lack of proof reading; misspellings; improper word usage; the works. I have, however received a lot of responses from them. I think its around 25 or so. I'm pretty sure that I could right this story. I want to go over and rip her eyeballs out. Noisy witch!

If you like, I'll spill it and you can write. I really hate reading over my stories. They are never as good to me as when I write them.

I'm game! Before you do so, perhaps you should read some of my work. You may find that I'm no better at this than you are.

Actually, I've read your stuff. I liked it, but found them too short. That's a compliment!

Clicking on the WWW button below this post will take you to my Lit homepage.

Regards,

-T

BTW, Tiggs is actually quite a nice person. Sure she takes her writing seriously, but so do I. I'm just not as vocal about it. I admire the way she says what she thinks. A compliment from Tiggs means something.

 

[lexium]

BTW, Tiggs is actually quite a nice person. Sure she takes her writing seriously, but so do I. I'm just not as vocal about it. I admire the way she says what she thinks. A compliment from Tiggs means something.

I say this, because I found her comments to be correct. She is right on most of the times. I hesitate to right, because I really hate reading my own writting. I attempted to contact one of the free editors, but I didn't get a response. I do get a lot of comment about the work I have done, but it still lack the basics.

I wonder if Tiggs would consider editing my work? I'm going to PM her to find out.

In the mean time. If you are willing to write it, I'm ready to tell it.

 

[Tatewaki]

In the mean time. If you are willing to write it, I'm ready to tell it.

Do tell, and I will write. I can also edit if you wish.

-T

 

[lexium]

Sounds good to me. Just do me a favor and not write it in the first person, OK.

Karen is 23 (name changed). She's 5'6 1/2", her hair has been dyed two shades darker from her original blonde. She has medium sized breasts, and an ass that is too big, if you let her tell it, however my son, Robert (Rob) disagrees. Her friend is a tall thin boy with long dyed black colored hair. From time to time, Karen would invite boys home when no one his there and fuck their brains out. On this occation, she had her friend out at the pic-nic table in the backyard. Like I said. It WAS very private. Karen has never been a shy girl, so running around in the backyard naked didn't bother her a bit. Her friend was leaving by the time I got home, but I know my daughter, and she never have casual male vistors. When they come home with her, they come to fuck. I've always been happy that my son and daughter dated. I never wanted them to become depended on me and my husband. Sex is the main topic around my house. If its not talked about, its usually being done.

Thats a little background...want me to start the story?

 

[Tatewaki]

Not yet. Still need lots of info:

OK, so Karen had friend over and had sex in the backyard. Nosy, bitchy neighbour sees her, and tells neighbourhood your daughter is a slut.

Is that it? Not to be facetious, but that kind of talk is probably all over the college campus. Who is she telling to have you so upset? Is it causing any personal difficulties for your child?

I am assuming that Rob wasn't in on the action. At least, you didn't explicitly say that he was, but you mentioned that I'd need to like incest.

The boy, does he have/need a name?

Bitchy neighbour: What does she look and sound like? Ditto for husband. What do they do for a living? Do they have children?

Your husband: Do you two swing? If you had sex with another man/woman, would he mind? Would he insist in participating? Would he make an ideal candidate for Clandestine Cameraman, or would that honour have to go to a third party? (Horny son Rob, perhaps? Any qualms about letting him see what mama is up to?)

You mentioned that you'd contemplated revenge-fucking her husband, but deep-sixed the notion on grounds that you'd not want to get involved with the neighbours. Is that real life or fantasy life talking?

You mentioned that you hold activities in the supposed privacy of your back yard. Is it possible that bitchy neighbour has had long practice in spying upon you and your family's activities?

How do you want this to play out? Obviously by shrewish bitchy neighbour utterly ruined, but what would you consider just desserts? Should we go with the pastor's wife plot, or add more fiendish punishments from your fertile imagination?

How do you see the revenge as unfolding? Should everyone in your family have a hand in bringing her down low, or not?

Let me know ...

-T

 

[Tatewaki]

Oh, regarding POV, I'll use 3rd person limited omniscient.

-T

 

[lexium]

Not yet. Still need lots of info:

You mentioned that you'd contemplated revenge-fucking her husband, but deep-sixed the notion on grounds that you'd not want to get involved with the neighbours. Is that real life or fantasy life talking?

You mentioned that you hold activities in the supposed privacy of your back yard. Is it possible that bitchy neighbour has had long practice in spying upon you and your family's activities?

-T

I have to forget about the husband, because I don't want to draw more attention to my home than there is already. Getting to the obvious question, the incest occurs between my son and daughter, husband and daughter, myself and my son. We have, from time to time had sex in the backyard. If I did have sex with the witches husband, I would tell my family before hand. We try not to hold secrets. It works for us. We bought the house three years ago, because of its location and space. My daughter my have a reputation at school, but the boys she bring home don't go to school with her. My son is a different matter. He has been dating the same girl for four years. I believe he may marry her, she has her own incestuous relationship with her family (step-father, mother knows but have her own problems).

The witch works at a manager at a supermarket, and her husband works at a restrurant. They don't have any children. She's about 38 and her husband is my age.

Fucking her husband is not really going to do anything, but cause them to get a divorce. He checks me out because I dress to get noticed. My son would fuck her if he got the opportunity, but my husband doesn't care that much for her either. The witch is really nothing special. She looks older than her age, which isn't very interesting.

The neighbor who was told is a 28 y/o single mother with small children. My daughter has kept her children a few times, which makes it awful that the which opened her mouth. My daughter has since talked to our neighbor who she babysits for, and explained the situation. Things seem to be fine between them. The witch needs to learn to keep her mouth shut. I just don't know what.

Maybe, I should try and get to know her husband, so that I can find out what makes the witch tick.

 

[Tatewaki]

Getting there!

Ok,

One thing to keep in mind, this is a revenge FANTASY story, and as such, doesn't have to conform exactly to real life. The closer it is, of course, the more of a rush you'll obtain from it. Names, places, occupations; they can all be changed. Hell, I can write a story w/o such details at all if you wish. Difficult, but such minimalist fiction can work if the plot is strong enough, the sex steamy enough, and the events captivating enough.

How much do you really hate this woman? You want her raped-and-left-for-dead hurt, humiliated and run out of town hurt, or just put in her place and left in her home with the knowledge that you are not a woman to fuck around with?

How about level of crudity in tone and language?

You missed F/f action. Your profile mentions Bi, and interested in women. I take it that this interest does not extend to your daughter?

We still going with the postman idea, or do you have some other wickedness in mind?

Remember this is fiction, so you can have anything happen. Don't feel compelled to be bound to real events unless you absolutely feel that you must.

Feel free to PM me if you wish, or continue this thread, whatever you are most comfortable with.

-T