Seeking an Editor, please for my second story in the "Mature" category

[themilf]

Good Morning,

I'm searching for an editor for an assist with (I believe) grammar and general story flow and am certainly open to addition to detail, adding heat, whatever YOU might be interested in helping with. At issue, perhaps is in my fictional writing, my potential "friend" starts out at 17 years of age but can turn 18 at any point. In fact, technically, he doesn't HAVE to be 17, I suppose. And he is now, in fact 23 years of age.

My single published story is here: http://www.i.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=309224

I am quite compliant and easy to work with, I believe, please have a look at the first few paragraphs of my new baby, below and tell me if you're willing to help me out, please?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

There are more mistakes than grammar. I don't know who has contacted you via PM, and if you have obtained an editor then that is great. However, if you haven't, I can edit, but in the middle of an edit at the moment. If you're willling to wait a few days then I can help. Better if someone else steps up to the plate sooner.

 

[themilf]

There are more mistakes than grammar. I don't know who has contacted you via PM, and if you have obtained an editor then that is great. However, if you haven't, I can edit, but in the middle of an edit at the moment. If you're willling to wait a few days then I can help. Better if someone else steps up to the plate sooner.

You, my friend are very kind to offer given the fact it appears as though you single-handedly administer the editor board! I respectfully withdraw my request as I have returned to work today and don't know when I will have the time to pursue this. Thanks for the offer.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

You, my friend are very kind to offer given the fact it appears as though you single-handedly administer the editor board!

There are many editors here who volunteer many hours of their time. It's just that in many instances the contacts are made via PM instead of the forum. I'm weird about wanting to contact via the forum so others can see when writers have been assisted, but many of the other editors do not do the same.

While I appreciate the kind words, my volunteer work is only more visible than the other editors who are certainly devoting as much or more time and effort than I am.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

By the way, does MILF stand for something? Just curious.

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

By the way, does MILF stand for something? Just curious.

As a retired military guy let me help a Comrade in Arms a bit.

Mother I'd Like to Fuck = MILF

Respectfully

Mike

 

[themilf]

I'm sorry, my friend, I didn't see your question.
I would have responded! However I've likely graduated to COUGAR at this point in my life.

By the way, does MILF stand for something? Just curious.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

As a retired military guy let me help a Comrade in Arms a bit.

Mother I'd Like to Fuck = MILF

Respectfully

Mike

Okay, makes sense, thanks. I'm more familiar with sayings like a cluster-fuck and other things.