Run Away

[Legolosis]

Hi everyone

my name is stve and i am the creater and editor of the new hit story and my first own story called "Run Away" which is now in the sci-fi fantasy section.

the story is about you being framed and locked behind bars by your old mate, just to get his sleazy dirty hands on your wife "Kristy" but 4 years later you have escaped from the prison, with a nurse by your side, you seek your path to revenge your old mate.

tell me what you think, and i would love some writers as well, as i said i am new to this and seeking some advice to improve storylines.

i hope you all enjoy

Run Away
http://www.chyoo.com:81/dx/?dx=c&story_id=1296

thanx

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Interesting...

Hello,
breaking out of prison... on the run... sounds familar. =) I just wanted to add my two cents to help you out. I choose form a gang, however, that isn't quite what I'd like to see. I would like to see the main character re-form his gang. Sort of like in the movie Gone in 60 seconds. Where Nicolas Cage gets his old buddies together. I think that would make a good story. Maybe giving his old buddies nicknames and telling a quick story how they got the names. A mix of guys would be better than a group of thugs. Having one thug guy isn't bad, but too many wouldn't be good.

So that is my thoughts. Oh yeah, I still owe you (Legolosis a thread for guessing the pornstar. I haven't forgotten and I just wanted you to know that I am waiting for this story to become a little more developed before I get on board. I have ideas for it and when the time is right I will add my part.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[Legolosis]

new thread has been added



hi everyone

i have just added a new thread to this new story, if you have not checked it out yet, i advice you to, the link is 2 posts above.

the new link is about your character getting kelly the nurse involved in your plans, can she overpower the two guards by your bedside?

thank you niceguy for the advice, i think that is a very good idea you mentioned, but i need help on some codenames?

if anyone has any ideas for names post a reply, because i am useless at thinking up names

cheers everyone

steve

 

[Legolosis]

New thread "A fake Hostage"

yet another new thread has been updated, this thread is the first of many action sequences, tell me what you all think?

 

[Legolosis]

New thread by Niceguy

Hey everyone

There is now a new thread been added to "RUN-AWAY" which was created by Niceguy2002, thanks.

I am so pleased that the story is in the number 2 spot for best ever section.

I will be adding a couple of new threads of my own, over the next week, and all writters are welcome to add, but each thread must be over 200 words please.

Thanx for reading

Steve

aka. Legolosis