Roommate (reader) catches writer masturbating

[ChibiFangirl]

I tried writing this story myself, but I'm not sure if I'm off to a good start or not. The scenario is the writer is naked on the bed, her door slightly ajar. She is pleasuring herself. The roommate gets home for a run and sneaks a peek. She notices him and invites him in. I have a draft, but I need feedback...

 

[Rob_Royale]

Go ahead and shoot me a PM. But only if you are looking for honest feedback.

 

[ChibiFangirl]

I can't send links for some reason. Do you have a discord? I can send it through there

 

[Rob_Royale]

How about emailing it?