Road-X-Trip [feedback thread]

[MahMan]

Hihohi !

Here's a thread for those of you who would like to react/ comment/ talk about Road-X-Trip.
Also I'll be announcing the new chapter's realeases here from now on !

Links to the story chapters:
Ch.1 : The Airport
Ch.2 : Gliding Interlude
Ch.3 : Concessions
Ch.4 : First miles
Ch.5 : Lake Night Quickie

Version Française :
Ch.1 : L'aéroport
Ch.2 : Interlude Planant
Ch.3 : Concessions

 

[MahMan]

Hi-o-hi, it’s MahMan again for a new update on ROAD-X-TRIP!

Chapter Four: First Miles

*Voiceover* « In the fourth installment of ROAD-X-TRIP: Now ‘proudly’ owning a motorhome, Olga and Richard head for Ottawa across the vast landscapes of Quebec. Tired and starving, they stop for the night alongside a river. In the morning, Richard wakes up with an unfinished wet dream that he intends to ‘describe’ very thoroughly to Olga… »

Chapter Tags: Cunnilingus, Breastplay, Masturbation, MF, Wet Dream, OC, WIP
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Dive into Olga and Richard's sexy journey across North-America. A passionate romance alongside many hot encounters awaits you! Road-X-Trip is an ongoing multi-chapters novel that I'll be updated regularly.

Xoxo MahMan

 

[MahMan]

Hey! Back with an other chapter of ROAD-X-TRIP!

In this new episode of Richard and Olga's motorised adventure, our couple stops by the shore of a remote lake for the night. Sitting aside the camper and enjoying a surprisingly cool evening, they (naturally) start to play very naughty games together when, suddenly, an other car stops a few meters away...

Chapter Tags: Outdoor Sex, Voyeur, Exhibitionism, Love, Romance, Risky Sex, Public, OC, WIP

Read Chapter Five: Lake night quickie here !

Alongside this chapter (and hopefully for the next ones) comes a poster that I hope you'll enjoy and will stir your curiosity into reading the story ! Seeya soon for chapter 6 !

 

[MahMan]

Hello!

I was checking the stories I've been posting on Lit this morning and a question came to my mind that I would like to share with you. I have published the first chapter of "Road-X-Trip" with the american style of punctuation ("..." for dialogues) and the others with a more personal style (— before dialogues) which is not unique at all but less used on this site.

I would really like to know, from those who red the story and others with an opinion about this matter, if one style or the other facilitates the reading, is more confortable etc. What are your thoughts about it? I would be happy to switch the style if it means more people can enjoy the stories.

thanks for your answers!

 

[ElectricBlue]

I would really like to know, from those who red the story and others with an opinion about this matter, if one style or the other facilitates the reading, is more confortable etc. What are your thoughts about it? I would be happy to switch the style if it means more people can enjoy the stories.

I would keep it consistent, using standard English punctuation, "that is, like this." Most of your readers will be from English speaking countries and will most likely be less familiar with alternatives.

 

[MahMan]

Hey!

Juste une petite annonce pour les lecteurs.rices français : les Chapitre 1, Chapitre 2 et Chapitre 3 sont disponibles sur Literotica dès maintenant! Bonne lecture

MahMan