Goldfinger,
normally I shy away from stories with short introductions, but yours is different. When I first read it I HAD to write something. I mentioned your story in a different post I put up on the disscusion board. I will repeat what I said though. I encourage everybody to read it, it is interesting. With Richard's Story it doesn't need much of an interduction because Richard is a person we all know somehow. He is the dick that always is better than you. The kind of guy who drives a huge 4X4 SUV but will never use it other than to cut off other driver on the freeway to get one car length ahead.
Richard reminds me of a character I saw in a Tim Allen movie called Joe Somebody. If you've saw the movie than you know who I am talking about. If not, get off chyoo and go rent it... no wait... go to my story and add a thread then go rent that movie.
I just reread my own intro and I get what you mean. It wasn't what I intended particularly but I think you are right and it could make for a good story to write with that in mind. Thanks.
