Rich, cruel and decadent brother and sister

[observer255]

Set somewhere warm. ...probably southern USA I want to write a loose chatty series of chapters centred around a rich playboy type in his mid twenties and his slightly younger sister. Will Involve their friends and sexual partners. The siblings will have the run of the family ranch somehow. Their parents possibly being on a cruise. The son will be focussed on enjoying the company of any attractive young woman he comes across while his gorgeous, yet indolent sister will enjoy the company particularly of powerful but married men. I want to introduce an element of cruelty and oppression. This will take the form of the cruel, handsome son insisting servants are whipped for indiscretions. Often at the urging of his younger sister when they've done something to displease her. Any comments or suggestions welcome. Thank you.

 

[ToPleaseHim]

Cruel Intentions?

 

[observer255]

Thanks. That would have been a better title!

 

[Hypoxia]

Setting and stereotypes can be important here. If in USA South then bro+sis are white and the servants are black -- or vice versa. Or set the story in central Mexico with a similar setup of aristos vs peons. Or in a Gulf state with bro+sis as royals; servants are Indian, Malay, Filipino, etc. Or go back to the France of the Marquis de Sade.

But where is the drama? Something threatens the siblings sadistic situation. Outside do-gooders, or a mangled servant's vengeful kin, or a slave revolt? Do bro+sis get their comeuppance, placed in stockades, beaten and used by those they've abused?

 

[observer255]

Hi . thanks for the reply. Yes....the drama may come from a former servant returning to get his revenge.... Make the brother watch his spoiled sister being punished etc. Or perhaps one of the sons sexual conquests family members who knew he went to far 'enjoying' his bachelor lifestyle. The other potential conflict might be between the life of luxury and pleasure the siblings and their friends enjoy versus the toil of the servants. ...even in 21st century USA.

The glamorous daughter will be a silicone enhanced vamp. ...probably 19/20.....totally shallow and self centred. The brother around 25, similarly selfish and principally concerned with emptying his balls into attractive young woman. Will no doubt drive a flash sports car and be vain. ....probably enjoying heels on his boots to look a bit taller. Totally detestable in short. All the more satisfying when they get what's coming to them.

 

[loquere]

Thanks. That would have been a better title!

"Cruel Intentions," is a film whose Plot is somewhat similar to your idea.

 

[observer255]

Ah yes...never seen it but aware of general plot.

 

[Dvision]

In Cruel Intentions the male character has problems with his psychiatrist. his family or perhaps a court has ordered him to go to a psychiatrist, who happens to have a beautiful but some kind of naive daughter. He blackmails his psychiatrist to write good reports after he has seduced her daughter and made some movies of her.

 

[GforGraham]

In Cruel Intentions the male character has problems with his psychiatrist. his family or perhaps a court has ordered him to go to a psychiatrist, who happens to have a beautiful but some kind of naive daughter. He blackmails his psychiatrist to write good reports after he has seduced her daughter and made some movies of her.

Forget the daughter, go straight for the doc, and include his or her spouse.
Another patient witnesses and blackmails the lead male. Make it for money, then storyline has background plot while the sex continues. Oops sorry this is erotica not porn, storyline has background sex while the frontground plot continues.

 

[PegMeKatePlease]

Setting and stereotypes can be important here. If in USA South then bro+sis are white and the servants are black -- or vice versa. Or set the story in central Mexico with a similar setup of aristos vs peons. Or in a Gulf state with bro+sis as royals; servants are Indian, Malay, Filipino, etc. Or go back to the France of the Marquis de Sade.

But where is the drama? Something threatens the siblings sadistic situation. Outside do-gooders, or a mangled servant's vengeful kin, or a slave revolt? Do bro+sis get their comeuppance, placed in stockades, beaten and used by those they've abused?

Sigh.

Dad is white, Mom is black. He's a global trotting do gooder every freakin' cause under the sun. And of course Grandpa made the money, he's just spending it all cause he's a beta male and therefore weak.

The good days are closing in - and the son knows it. He's gonna have to produce but just. Isn't. Ready. Yet.

Sister will be the one to bring the family back. In an ugly way.

Set this in Kansas. As white bread as can be.

The staff - mix of trailer trash whites and undocumented Latino. Everyone needs the freakin' job!!!

 

[NotWise]

I may have met that family. Dad was French. Mom was from a land-owning southern family -- lots of political connections and favors owed. Daughter is a model and a bitch. Son is sexually confused, I think. Parents may not be absent, but just not paying attention.

Is the story set in current time? Might be more realistic if it were ~1950.

You seem to have the characters and the setting thought out more than the story itself.

For the cruelty aspect, you might think more of mental/emotional cruelty rather than physical. In the southern setting, overwork, underpay, refusal to pay unless certain performance demands are fulfilled. Manipulaltion pitting servant against servant. Not allowing servants to see their own family and friends. Threats of firing. Threats of spreading rumors that would get a black man lynched and a black woman raped and beaten, or their house burned down.

Those were dark times.

 

[Dvision]

If you want to follow the scripit then your male main character is sexually expierenced and very attractive for the ladies. He is a women magnet. they see this nice handsome boyish man, an itch they can't resist. He likes experienced ladies but likes to create a scandal by 'perverting' the innoncent ladies and threatening to expose them.

Setting it in the fifties is good, you could also set it in the seventies, what a times...... a good idea is that he is connected to politicians and the fuzz. He is kind of untouchable because he is generous and likes 'to share' money, drugs and ladies. And of course his delicious sister who likes to give sexual favours.

The psycho aspect made it a cruel story. The lady is in love with her handsome prince and thinks the world of him, while he just does't give a damn about her, and just uses her in some plot.