Rescued, By Countess DeWinter

[R Nitelight]

I would like to thank you for bringing your story to my attention, my dear Countess. Being familiar with your work on the SRP Boards, I approached your first contribution with high expectations, and was not disappointed.

Using a historical setting, your reader comes away with a strong sense of time and place. Your characters are well drawn and likable, and the sparks that fly between the pair feel authentic. Your attention to detail is strong, and your writing is clear and seductive.

The only thing I can say that approaches criticism is the end. It feels unfinished. There is more story here, Countess. If you are not working on sequels, you should. I want to read the further adventures of Maggie and Rafe.

 

[Countess DeWinter]

sequal...

I hadn't thought of that, but I will certainly give it some thoughtful consideration.
Thank you for your kind remarks. They mean so much more comming from you. Kisses!

 

[Weird Harold]

The only thing I can say that approaches criticism is the end. It feels unfinished.

I concur -- Sort of. Sequels would be very nice. However, I think you wrapped things up fairly neatly for a short story.

This is a story that is well worth the time to read. Brava, Milady!.