CreepyPotato
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Hello, I'm an amateur writer who's been out of the game for quite a while. I just completed the second chapter of a short story I posted ages ago, and I'm feeling quite nervous regarding it. It's been about a year, or maybe more since I last wrote anything, especially erotica, and I feel that some proofreading and perhaps some experienced insight might help me improve the chapter before I upload it.
The first chapter can be found in the link at the bottom of my post. It's my earnest hope that I have improved since then, but as I mentioned I've not written in a while.
It is probably important to note that the story does contain incest, and so readers opposed to that should probably stay away.
The new chapter currently stands at just over 10k words. If you are unsure whether you would like to edit for me without reading a portion of my story first, please pm me. I'll happily send you a sample.
Thanks in advance for your assistance!
~a nervous potato
http://www.literotica.com/s/european-vacation-1
An editor has been found! This request is done for now!
The first chapter can be found in the link at the bottom of my post. It's my earnest hope that I have improved since then, but as I mentioned I've not written in a while.
It is probably important to note that the story does contain incest, and so readers opposed to that should probably stay away.
The new chapter currently stands at just over 10k words. If you are unsure whether you would like to edit for me without reading a portion of my story first, please pm me. I'll happily send you a sample.
Thanks in advance for your assistance!
~a nervous potato
http://www.literotica.com/s/european-vacation-1
An editor has been found! This request is done for now!
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