Requesting editor for reluctance story

[YummyTiger]

Hello, jolly good day and all that jazz.

I am hoping one of you fine volunteer editors might be willing to break down my story for me. It will be my first submission to Literotica and I'm hoping to come in with a BANG! Anyways, on to the specifics---

My story is entitled Camera Capers and in it, the protagonist has recently discovered his passion for photography. He sneaks a few pictures of the neighbor girl and devious fun ensues. The story is currently running about 7500 words, but that number is as fluid as my bowel movements... ack, did I really just say that? Oh well, shouldn't have eaten the chicken! Seriously though, what writer can ever stop tweaking? I would estimate that I have about 20-25 hours in the piece, so it is a bit more than my original chicken-scratch. Just a bit.

Last and probably least, I have submitted a two stories to other websites and they recieved a positive reception. I even got a happy email or two. Now, I am excited to be finally submitting a story to Literotica. I feel this is my best erotic work yet and would love to hear your criticisms and maybe a complement or two!

Let me know,
YummyTiger

 

[jackell99]

Send it on

As a writer and photographer, I'd be interested in reading what you have.
email it to me if you like
someone@something.com

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... I am hoping one of you fine volunteer editors might be willing ...

You might get a better response if you switch on your Private Messages. Go to User CP (top left of this page) then click on Edit Options (in the left hand column) and then tick Enable Private Messaging in the second box down. Finally click Save Changes at the bottom of that page.

 

[jackell99]

story

I got your story, but today is my deadline day, so it will be tomorrow evening before I will have time to read it.
Will let you know something as soon as I do.
Jack

 

[YummyTiger]

Good point! I did not even know that it was disabled.

Thanks.