Request: Mind Control

[Kurocero]

Im thinking about a story where a kid (White Male)(18) in high school moves to an inner city mostly minorities maybe black and some Latino. Kid gets jumped badly for being different. "Wakes up with powers or an old man janitor remind him of his mixed child who was bullied into suicide, for going into a school like that many years ago. And decides to give the young lad powers he obtained through, makes some ancient deal to impregnate everyone who wrong him ... Etc... Powers obtained doesn't have to be what I just wrote just a suggestion."

Anywho, he gains the powers and ends up getting revenge on those and just using his powers to his whim on whoever. Leaving a wake of pregnant teachers, parents, and students behind him.

Also you could flip the scenario to be a black student in a rural community gets jumped by white students then story plays out the same kinda deal.

I apologize to those i probably gave a brain aneurysm to reading all of that. As far as what I need in there for the character to get jumped and powers to follow. Mind control (extent of powers up to writer/s) preferably to have a scene where he gets with one of the main bullies either gf/parent/sister. Female on top riding the main character, but her words are her owns displeasure and disgust while his bully is forced to watch not able too move at all, while whoever is being impregnated.

I apologize I know it might sound like a hot mess but work with me, pleasw. I leave everything else to their discretion. But if there are any more questions I'd gladly answer them.

 

[horrorotic]

Mind control-which is 100% non consent/rape by the way-must be the go to fantasy of the extremely insecure, they have to have a way to control women to want them.

 

[Kurocero]

Ok?? Well I'd still like a story for it since there's sections specifically fits into both categories which is an available on this site, is it not?

 

[AlinaX]

Heh. 90% of Mind Control is well into NonCon territory, and the important thing is to keep it erotic rather than vengeful destruction.

It might be funny if his power included making his male bullies develop vaginas and wombs, or even undergo full sex changes, whether temporary or permanent. And reality shifts to make the changes seem completely natural, however unlikely.

 

[Hypoxia]

I dislike most MC because, like unlimited magic, anything can happen, so the author can be pretty lazy about handling conflict and consequence. IMHO a serious MC tale has the controller suffering for their strength, paying a price in IQ or vitality / lifespan. especially for non-defensive MC acts.

Thus, defence from bullying doesn't 'cost' as much as ordering a fuck for the MC'er or anyone else, unless the defence is itself malicious. Order the bully to stop bothering people is a freebie; making the bully submit to humiliation 'costs' more; making the bully submit to gang rape is much more costly. Turn your MC'er into a bully or rapist and they'll get old, weak, and/or stupid real fast.

 

[Kurocero]

I dislike most MC because, like unlimited magic, anything can happen, so the author can be pretty lazy about handling conflict and consequence. IMHO a serious MC tale has the controller suffering for their strength, paying a price in IQ or vitality / lifespan. especially for non-defensive MC acts.

Thus, defence from bullying doesn't 'cost' as much as ordering a fuck for the MC'er or anyone else, unless the defence is itself malicious. Order the bully to stop bothering people is a freebie; making the bully submit to humiliation 'costs' more; making the bully submit to gang rape is much more costly. Turn your MC'er into a bully or rapist and they'll get old, weak, and/or stupid real fast.

I'd like to still keep the main course of the MC. But maybe have it like he's burning part of his soul. Which in forth allows for a demon to move in and attempt/actually takes control of his body. Leading up to like the birth of the Anti-Christ or multiple options for one to be born.

 

[LupusDei]

I dislike most MC because, like unlimited magic, anything can happen, so the author can be pretty lazy about handling conflict and consequence. IMHO a serious MC tale has the controller suffering for their strength, paying a price in IQ or vitality / lifespan. especially for non-defensive MC acts.

Thus, defence from bullying doesn't 'cost' as much as ordering a fuck for the MC'er or anyone else, unless the defence is itself malicious. Order the bully to stop bothering people is a freebie; making the bully submit to humiliation 'costs' more; making the bully submit to gang rape is much more costly. Turn your MC'er into a bully or rapist and they'll get old, weak, and/or stupid real fast.

Would you design a game around the subject, sure.

In a limited directed action a story most times is, artificial fairness isn't all that important factor. Doesn't change a fact that unlimited and competent mind controller could apparently bend reality any way they please making any rules and any conflict moot, not unlike any god character, but out of all superpowers this one is indeed worst.

It could be used for an effect of course. One might suddenly discover their clothes are apparently disappeared in a public place (because they were instructed to take them off and immediately forget they did) and wonder why no one is reacting in any way or even noticing, or take it as normal if they are forced to confront it (because everyone in range had been compelled to think that it is indeed absolutely normal for said person to be naked). But that's the absurd world of mind controller's victims; it could be interesting to explore if the suspected mind controller has very limited goals and/or alien psychology understanding with then becomes a matter of survival, and even that's possible only if the powers aren't absolute and leave some transparency to be had.

But indeed, the actual controller's point of view is only marginally interesting if their abilities are very specifically limited and employed hopelessly incompetently, and even then they're just ordinary minor gods. Well, for them to actually have problems, make them care about others more than themselves, others in a fucked up situations definitely not suitable for their unique talents to be useful. It may become a puzzle of moral dilemmas then.

 

[Kurocero]

So any takers I'd love to see what y'all could come up with?