Repetition through Chapters/Sequels

[Rob_Royale]

In my story Milf Cruise its the same couple in each scene. The first is pretty vanilla, two new lovers first time. After that they start to explore a little link into their couplings.

 

[ronde]

My threshold question is, what's your story? Why are you writing a multi-chapter story in the first place? There must be some reason. Otherwise, just write standalone stories.

This is my general approach to multi-chapter stories: ratchet up the sex for each chapter, or at the least do something very different with each chapter, with each one meaningfully heading toward an ultimate goal. If you don't have a dramatic goal in mind, why write a series?

I have written a few series stories, but they were all just chapters from a very long story that I published as separate stories. The way to keep from repeating yourself is to finish the complete series and then read it to see if everything makes sense. If you attempt to write a series one story at a time, what you'll inevitably find is that you need to change parts of the preceding stories to agree with what you're currently writing. That can be repeating the same descriptions of the sex act verbatim if you're not careful. That happens because you "use up" all the juicy terms in the first of the series and don't have anything different left for the subsequent stories in the series. Writing the whole series and then re-reading it before you post anything will make the repetition painfully obvious.

I would disagree that there are only so many ways to describe sex. The actual sex may be the same thing, but by varying the wording and sequence of events, the description can turn the same act into something that seems different.