Real experience.. need help

[sissyashbottom]

Hello guys ,

I need to put my real experience into a story .. need your help in it .. the situations which led to one thing and the other .
Can anyone help ?

 

[Sean Renaud]

Just tell us what you want here in the forums.

 

[sissyashbottom]

How to put real experience.. 1st person perspective or 3rd ?
And it’s about fam (legal .. all over 18) and femdom

 

[Rob_Royale]

First-person is pretty common in these situations, but when you expand the cast, third-person is the way to go if you want to show what each is feeling, and thinking. There's no reason a personal story can't be told in the third person.

 

[Carnevil9]

Write the first three or four paragraph both ways. You'll see which one feels more natural.

 

[Euphony]

First-person is pretty common in these situations, but when you expand the cast, third-person is the way to go if you want to show what each is feeling, and thinking. There's no reason a personal story can't be told in the third person.

Rob is spot on here.

If an author isn't confident in their skills, 1st feels more naturally comfortable. Just stay aware of lens and only allow your character to see what their limited perspective can see.

When telling a personal experience, frequently the author wants their representative in the story to also be the pivot everything revolves around. 1st works in congruence with this as well.

One of the underestimated skills is simply believing your story has a right to exist. There's probably a less woo woo way of stating it but this works for me.

I'm convinced more stories die a needless death simply because authors trip themselves up beforehand more than any hurdle that will come.

Drafts can be edited. Pages left blank can't.

Allow yourself to make garbage you can craft into collage.

 

[Rob_Royale]

Allow yourself to make garbage you can craft into collage.

Quote of the day right there. It almost feels like it should be on a flowery embroidery hoop on the wall. Well done sir.

 

[Euphony]

Quote of the day right there. It almost feels like it should be on a flowery embroidery hoop on the wall. Well done sir.

Everyone needs a spirit animal.

 

[sissyashbottom]

Got it , but the thing is I’m looking for someone who can write it , maybe I can tell them my experience and they can write a story down .

 

[Rob_Royale]

Got it , but the thing is I’m looking for someone who can write it , maybe I can tell them my experience and they can write a story down .

That is what this forum section is for. Passing on ideas. Why don't you give us a two-paragraph summary in this thread and perhaps someone will be interested in it enough to give it a try? I've little enough time for my own stories, and I'm sure that's true of most of us. But you never know.

 

[sissyashbottom]

That is what this forum section is for. Passing on ideas. Why don't you give us a two-paragraph summary in this thread and perhaps someone will be interested in it enough to give it a try? I've little enough time for my own stories, and I'm sure that's true of most of us. But you never know.