Read, vote, and feedback the person above you thread

[BlackShanglan]

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Posted by BlackShanglan
You know what we should start? A "read and vote on the person above you" thread. It's like a pyramid scheme, only it works.

Hmmm. Thing is though, could we handle that maturely, and not carp and whine if someone voted below a five, given that we'd know who it was? Or would it degenerate into hurt feelings and backbiting?

What am I talking about. This is us. A group of grown adults sharing a deep common interest in language and artistry.

It'd be bloody chaos.

Nonetheless, I shall be pleased to champion and initiate that chaos. Here are the rules:

(1) Choose a work of yours that you would like read and voted and/or commented. Please don't choose works more than three Literotica pages long.

(2) Post to the thread so as to mark your place.

(3) Read and vote the work listed above you, and leave a PC or feedback if you possibly can. We all love that.

(4) Be honest in your voting. This is not a "plead for free 5's" thread.

(5) Be considerate and tactful in your PC. If it's really rough going, consider leaving private feedback so as not to publically hurt someone's feelings.

(6) When you've read and voted (and ideally left a PC or feedback), edit your post to indicate that you've done so. Please don't take on more than one at a time.

(7) If you're the first respondent, read mine

I'm throwing out The Private Diary of Alexander Pope or (much shorter) Camlann, A. D. 539. Or Letters from the Hesperus if you don't like either of those.

Shanglan

 

[brightlyiburn]

I win! I win!

(I'll get to it later, promise)

And um, I guess I'll throw myself into the pot.
This is the first chapter of my new story, The Taming of the Shrew.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=184632

(My apologies to Mr. Will)

Edit: Note to self: never pick the short story simply to appease my ADHD.
This is not the type of story I really like, so I had to work from a very neutral standpoint. So uh...what I said might not make much sense.
And hopefully my honesty won't bring your fans down on my head.

 

[Guest]

I win! I win!

(I'll get to it later, promise)

And um, I guess I'll throw myself into the pot.
This is the first chapter of my new story, The Taming of the Shrew.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=184632

(My apologies to Mr. Will)

k, ive got your "The Taming of the Shrew"
looking forward to reading in am.

and ill raise:
Deluge


EDITED: read and reviewed, The Taming of the Shrew Ch. 01

 

[cloudy]

k, ive got your "The Taming of the Shrew"
looking forward to reading in am.

and ill raise:
Deluge

Did I already read that one? I think I did, but if I have, I'll just pick one of yours I haven't, deal?

I'll throw The Fury out there, or if you've read that, then maybe Atlantis Revisited, Ch. 1.

 

[Guest]

Ok I've already read all of Cloudy's (naturally ) And read and voted on all of Vella's too.

I'll take a read on Burn's story.

The Striped Shirt could use a few more votes and comments. You can get to it from my sig.

 

[Guest]

 

[BlackShanglan]

I'm bagging that one. I like the title!

I'll put up the same three as before (see first post). Any one of them will do.

I'll have the review by tomorrow PM.

Shanglan

(Edited to add: Reviewed "Mrs. Wibble" 2/10/05).

 

[Lisa Denton]

I'm bagging that one. I like the title!

I'll put up the same three as before (see first post). Any one of them will do.

I'll have the review by tomorrow PM.

Shanglan

What if I do this wrong? Are you all gonna hit me?

What if somebody posts while I am typin? I type slow.

Anywho I picked Sweetness and Servitude Ch.4 and look foward to readin it but I am all asleepy now so by tomorrow pm.

My first story needs a vote, it got bombed again.
Its a toy story.

Lisa's story for the thread thingie


EDITED BELOW:

Shanglan I read the Sweetness and Servitude Ch. 4 thingie and liked it even though I usually wouldn't look for something like that, it was a pleasant surprise. I didn't see anything that was wrong and liked the way it flowed along and seemed well written, is I guess a good way to say it. Am I supposed to say what vote I gave you? Oh well, it was a five. I left a comment and sent a feedback thingie also.

Did I do right? Did I miss anything? Threadwise I mean.

 

[BlackShanglan]

(Please see a small change - rule #6 is now a new one to encourage us all to complete our duties. We get to celebrate when we do .)

 

[Lord DragonsWing]

What if I do this wrong? Are you all gonna hit me?

What if somebody posts while I am typin? I type slow.

Anywho I picked Sweetness and Servitude Ch.4 and look foward to readin it but I am all asleepy now so by tomorrow pm.

My first story needs a vote, it got bombed again.
Its a toy story.

Lisa's story for the thread thingie

Excellent story Lisa!!!!!!!!! I'm about to post a comment. Wanted to respond here first.


I'm submitting Painter's Canvas. A short dark erotic tale.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=143645

 

[brightlyiburn]

(Please see a small change - rule #6 is now a new one to encourage us all to complete our duties. We get to celebrate when we do .)

I already did that. Maybe I'm psychic?

 

[doormouse]

Seeing as brightlyIburn has already pasted a link, I'll review that one too



My audio poem could use a vote or three. The link is in my sig.

My Audio Poem

EDIT: OMG do yourself a favour and ready that story!!!!

Hot stuff brightly, bring on the other chapters!!! I think I voted twice lol Couldn't remember if I had the first time, so did again
brightlyiburn's story

 

[BlackShanglan]

Next poster please review Lord Dragon Wing's. I'd like to keep this a review of the last unreviewed poster (brightly wasn't posting for review there) in order to make sure that everyone gets back what's given in.

Brightly - no worries I don't think I have fans, and if I do I hope they're more sensible than to resent sincere and honest comments. I want and need those.

Shanglan

 

[sweetnpetite]

Kinki Kiki

Kiki Johnson was 19, tall and slender with breasts the size of small apples. She wore her black hair in a long pony tail that ran straight down her back. Her features where Americanized Asian and she had no trace of an accent.

Kiki lived in a luxury apartment which was elegantly furnished. She spent her free time studying about the world, and learning everything from card games to swing dancing to water-skiing. She made it a point to be proficient and knowledgeable about many things. Kiki believed in being well rounded, but she found that her many interests came in handy for her profession as well.

Kiki had a thriving business, which grew mainly from word of mouth. True she had business cards that circulated among those in a position to take advantage of her services. They weren’t very colorful and didn’t give any hint that she lived the type of lifestyle that she did.

A simple plain white cared could be found in the possession of those who had been referred by other satisfied customers.

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=156552


read and sent feedback, and voted.

 

[Shadowskill Knight]

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=156552

I'll take a go at your's Snp. It's night here so I'll get to it tomorrow.

I'm new here, so I only have one poem and it needs votes. The link is in my sig.



Edited: I've read, voted and commented. Nice work Snp

 

[English Lady]

Go on I'll pick yours up shadowskill Knight.

(I've read your poem now, liked it, voted and feedbacked )


Well I'd like someone to look at this one. As it was shoved in fetish and I don't think fetish readers were impressed with it *L*

A Fruitful Life


but if you've already seen it look at one of the three competition entries in my sigline -cheers

(Really good thread Shanglan )

 

[impressive]

Well I'd like someone to look at this one. As it was shoved in fetish and I don't think fetish readers were impressed with it *L*

A Fruitful Life

Gotcha, EL.

I'll toss out "Boiling Point" ... or, if you've already read it, "Jake"

Both links in sig.

EDITED: Great thread, Shang!

RE-EDITED: RVC'd on "A Fruitful Life" this morning. Yummy story, EL!

 

[Guest]

 

[Lisa Denton]

This is only a bump after I edited my post, Lime is the last poster.

 

[BlackShanglan]

Am I supposed to say what vote I gave you? ... I left a comment and sent a feedback thingie also.

Did I do right? Did I miss anything? Threadwise I mean.

You did beautifully, dear. I don't think we need to post what we voted - although people are certainly welcome to - and I much appreciate the vote and feedback. You are entirely too kind.

Lime is still the last poster.

Shanglan

 

[Guest]

I'll read Lime's A Night Out.
v~

Read and reviewed! awesome

 

[cloudy]

I'll read Lime's A Night Out.
v~

Vella, I'd already done "Deluge" so I did "Sensual Sabbatical" instead - is that cool? Already RVC'd on it, just a little bit ago.

 

[Guest]

Vella, I'd already done "Deluge" so I did "Sensual Sabbatical" instead - is that cool? Already RVC'd on it, just a little bit ago.

you rock, cloudster. thank you.

 

[impressive]

Who's next? Cloudy? I've time to read one right now.

 

[cloudy]

Who's next? Cloudy? I've time to read one right now.

Imp, I think you've already RVC'd on The Fury, but I'm game if you wanna just pick one of mine you haven't read, and have a go at it (Just don't read Private Party - it's one I'm going to edit eventually, it sucks that bad).