Read Me?

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Hey, it's Katerina here! Okay, why am I here...groveling in the author's hangout? I'll tell you...cause I'm not getting any attention in the feedback thread. Will this work? Hell, I don't know. Hehehe...I hope it will. Grins.

I just wanna be noticed...I wanna be read...And, I'd love your thoughts on my new story, Dancing Angel

Anyways...

Meet Cassie, a young single woman in search of her true sexuality. Coming to know Serena online has changed her, bringing undeniable excitement into her life. She needs to find her way, meet the woman that danced into her heart and her very soul. Only then, can she truly be free. Read on; find out how Cassie's impatience gets the best of her, bringing her a night of unforgettable memories.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=132860

 

[minsue]

I love a girl who's not afraid to grovel. You're on my weekend reading list. (unfortunately, I rarely get to most of what's on my list, but I will eventually! )

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Thanks

Hey Minsue, hope you do get a chance to read Angel, and I hope you enjoy it too. Thanks for your support.

Hugs katerina

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Okay, one response....I give up!

 

[Belegon]

Don't give up so soon, some of us just like to see begging (feeds our thoughts for our next story).

 

[pop_54]

Quite so, I have visions in my head now, she's on her knees... yes that's it... she's reaching up... Oh yes go on...............


Ok Katerina I'll take a look later when I get home

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

Guess the groveling and begging worked after-all. But...but...not on my knees.

Hope you enjoy it pop!


Belegon...I'll try not to give up...

Hugs Kat

 

[Lord Naraku]

OK I was half asleeping while reading this...

One at the begining of the story you say it's a night club, but this turns out to be just a strip club. IMO a night club and a strip club are two totally differant animals.

Two did you discribe Cassie at all or did I miss it?

Third Senera this girl does a standard strip tease show lasting I would guess 3-4 minutes and only after do you ravel Senera has auburn hair. Also Senera eye color wasn't told till just before we got to the action.

Overall I just had a hard time picturing stuff when I knew so little about these two women.