Rainy Day story challenge

[Belegon]

found this on the new story list...

coincidence, or someone who wanted in and forgot to post?

Rainy Day Story by anovelidea

 

[Guest]

ive only read three so far and im blown away.. what a talented bunch of people. cant wait to get to the rest..


*excitedly*
v~

 

[Lord DragonsWing]

Damn I'm glad I've got the next couple of days off so I read all the stories. The ones I've read so far are excellent!!!!!!!!!!! Good work everyone. There's enough talent here to write a bestseller.

 

[impressive]

I did it! What a, um, wet day it's been! Rain will no longer put OUT fires!

 

[lucky-E-leven]

I'm nearly halfway through them all and have had so much fun with this challenge. Great work, everyone!

~lucky (typing whilst rain drips lazily down my window)

 

[cloudy]

I'm nearly halfway through them all and have had so much fun with this challenge. Great work, everyone!

~lucky (typing whilst rain drips lazily down my window)

I don't know why I'm amazed at the talent that has beome crystal clear with this challenge, but I'm in awe of everyone right now.

(and Lucky, that mention of rain makes me twitch )

 

[matriarch]

I don't know why I'm amazed at the talent that has beome crystal clear with this challenge, but I'm in awe of everyone right now.

(and Lucky, that mention of rain makes me twitch )

*laughing my head off, almost hysterical with pleasure*.

I know exaccerly what you mean, beautiful.

I can't read any more, I'm a twitching mess.

(typing while I have the window open in my garrett, to try and cool down. No rain here yet. Only in my head)

Mat

 

[Belegon]

I've never wanted a storm so bad in my life!

 

[Honey123]

I've never wanted a storm so bad in my life!

Um...you want a storm?

 

[matriarch]

Honey baby, go do something with your box......I'm desperate to get in and you're all full up.

 

[matriarch]

I did it! What a, um, wet day it's been! Rain will no longer put OUT fires!

Precisely.
From now on, rain will start fires.........rowrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.

 

[Honey123]

Honey baby, go do something with your box......I'm desperate to get in and you're all full up.

My box is empty, as is my heart....

What a load of crap that is, huh?

Come, baby girl...do me

 

[RebeccaLeah]

I hope it lasts, but I'm not sure, you all know how fickle trolls are. Grrrrrr! Anyway......

LUCKY, BABE, RIDDEN TEMPTEST IS #1 ON THE LESBIAN STORIES TOP LIST!!!!!

*crossing my fingers that it stays up there*

 

[lucky-E-leven]

It won't last, but it was fun while it lasted. Vella's story, Deluge, was up there all afternoon. Super fun stuff.



I read your story, Becca. *sizzle* Very hot and oh so much fun. I've had a great time with this challenge. Must try and read the rest tonight and tomorrow.



~lucky

 

[PG13]

Were the results from this contest ever posted?

 

[matriarch]

Were the results from this contest ever posted?

PG, There are no results as such, it wasn't a contest, set by Lit, it was a challenge set within the Author Hangout Forum.

Challenges set within forums, tend to be set as additional ways of honing our skills as writers.

Writing to a specific topic, within a set timescale, and to a specific length are all good disciplines for budding writers.

I think I can safely say that those of us who took part, enjoyed ourselves immensely, and the results were outstanding. I hope you've read some of them.

But thanks for asking.

Matriarch

 

[gauchecritic]

There's an idea

Were the results from this contest ever posted?

My result:

Thunder Follows Lightning.

Views 15986 Votes 32 Score 4.56

Fave Pub.Com: By Anonymous

Gritty and idiosyncratic
An agile mind, a poet's eye, existential accepting realism and seamless revelation of character. What the fuck is this doing on a porn site? Brilliant, but never quite engaging. Like the narrator, analytic throughout.


Gauche

 

[matriarch]

Gauche, you've just given me an idea for some sort of closure on this challenge, if the combatants are willing.


Suggestion:

Do exactly what G has just done.
Post your results on this thread, as of noon, on Sunday coming, 31 October, the last day of the month.

Also post your favourite piece of feedback, for whatever reason.

Whaddya think people?

Mat

 

[cloudy]

My results:

The Fury

rating: 4.68 - 41 votes - 5161 views

Favorite PC:

What An Oddly Endearing Story!
10/06/04 By: Anonymous
As others have already commented on, the intensity of the storm/tornado was only matched by the intensity of the sex this couple has for one another.

The descriptions of winds, the landscape, and sex --- the warm, welcoming mud beneath her contrasting with the cold wind and rain above her husband --- were quite vivid.

Awesome little story!

 

[cantdog]

Were the results from this contest ever posted?

My result:

"Encore: Passadumkeag Waltz"

Views 1781 Votes 16 Score 4.69

I got an e-mail feedback:
Encore, It didn't sound fictional.



.......
Essentially, almost nobody looked at it, but the voting was good. Hell of a voting percentage( 0.9%), but it was probably all due to us reading one another and the low views.

 

[impressive]

Great idea for closure, Mat! My results to date:

Votes 51
Views 14,798
PCs 10
Score 4.80

Favorite PC:

Holy mackerel
10/05/04 By: cantdog
One very erotic tour de force! Una sinverguenza se haya puesto chingada-- I can dig it! But an ambitious artist scores a triumph, besides! Bold and broad, varied, interesting, tongue-in-cheek and yet intensely hot where it needed to be. I'm awed.

 

[matriarch]

Heather's Baptism

Score: 4.71
Votes: 69
Views: 16,406

Favourite feedback (e-mail)

I have read love stories before,but none will ever meet and certainly not surpass this one.I felt as if I were with you and the love was transferred to me through you both.Thank you very much. Pony.

This was a very different direction for me in my writing, a softer, less sexually blatent attempt, and I wasn't sure how it would go down. It was simply a story I wanted to write. Thank heavens, the readers seem to have enjoyed it.

Mat

 

[damppanties]

Untouchable Fate Ch. 01

Score: 4.38
Votes: 21
Views: 12875

Can't decide between two PCs, will reproduce both.

Can't wait
10/08/04 by Honey123
to read the next chapter! It was an enjoyable read. The way you wrote the story using the italicized words added a bit of mystery to the story-line. Once I saw what the words meant, parts that weren't clear, became clearer and the words I actually "understood" made perfect sense!

Great story!

Honey

This one because I was really worried about how the Hindi bits would go down with the lit reader... and this one was so enthusiastic about the way they were written in.

and then...

Forbidden
10/09/04 by vella_ms
Lust. what could be better, that thrill of breaking the rules...but the possibility of getting away with it. Tasty story. excited to read the next installment!
*hugs*
v~
(fellow blanket sniffer)

This one because it had the word 'tasty' and made me grin crazily.

 

[matriarch]

Just butting in....

Hey Dampee.......long time no see.

 

[Belegon]

"Wet Panties?"

score: 4.68
votes: 105
views: 25774

15 PC's, It was hard to choose. I let the email alone for this purpose...

favorite comment:
Very strong writing, Bel
10/05/04 By: cantdog
...especially once the third kiss starts. I bow in your general direction!

Now I'll have to think about first person again, instead of just dismissing it out of hand. I dislike first person. But you have shown me that it depends what you do with it.

...because it meant that I had done something well enough to actually take a position Cant had formed about a general form and create an opportunity for reevaluation.

But I am a feedback slut and I adore all comments on my work!