Purity Ball

[snooper]

*evil grin* What if the Purity Ball takes place the same night as a Suicide Girls convention?

... or a group of Hell's Angels decide to gatecrash the Ball?

 

[Texguy84]

... or a group of Hell's Angels decide to gatecrash the Ball?

Or even worse... a suicide girl BIKER GANG!

 

[Reshbod]

Or even worse... a suicide girl BIKER GANG!

May as well go all the way...suicide girl biker gang vampires.

 

[emap]

Resh your silly that isn't all the way, suicide girl biker gang vampire werewolves is all the way.

Snoopy your bad, Hell's Angel's aren't bad, ask them they are fine upstanding citizens.

Though actually, they aren't all bad, I have met a few, they were rather nice and intelligent guys. Bit scruffy but well I suppose when you go around on a motorcycle like that a beard is a good idea, for catching bugs. I did sleep with one, made him take a shower, I helped and we brushed his beard. Did get some good sex out of it though.

 

[DarkBee]

Maybe there's a lesbian convention in the next room and when they have a break they discover all the sweet, innocent girls next door!

 

[Texguy84]

Maybe there's a lesbian convention in the next room and when they have a break they discover all the sweet, innocent girls next door!

To quote Saucyminx, "They all think they're straight until I get into their panties!"

 

[Fantasies_only]

... or a group of Hell's Angels decide to gatecrash the Ball?

Or even worse... a suicide girl BIKER GANG!

May as well go all the way...suicide girl biker gang vampires.

Resh your silly that isn't all the way, suicide girl biker gang vampire werewolves is all the way.

Snoopy your bad, Hell's Angel's aren't bad, ask them they are fine upstanding citizens.

Though actually, they aren't all bad, I have met a few, they were rather nice and intelligent guys. Bit scruffy but well I suppose when you go around on a motorcycle like that a beard is a good idea, for catching bugs. I did sleep with one, made him take a shower, I helped and we brushed his beard. Did get some good sex out of it though.

Everybody please stay on topic.
I was expecting everyone to be PMing me with some good ideas.

Maybe there's a lesbian convention in the next room and when they have a break they discover all the sweet, innocent girls next door!

To quote Saucyminx, "They all think they're straight until I get into their panties!"

Everyone, please be serious.
This has to be at least somewhat believable.
We have to progress the story naturally.
If anyone wants to write their own post using these ideas, please do some of the work yourself or else put your ideas in PMs to me to help me go on from where I left off.
Remember to make it a semi believable progression, and not just hopping into bed with multiple partners.

 

[snooper]

... Snoopy your bad ...

Repetitious.

... Hell's Angel's aren't bad, ask them they are fine upstanding citizens. ...

I used to drink in a bar the South London (UK) Chapter used as their HQ (was that really half a century ago?) and they were really helpful when I bought a cheap old motorbike and had problems with it. I was thinking more of the fictional Hell's Angels who are AAALLL BAAAD.

 

[emap]

Oh yeah good point, I so would not want to run into of those. Course if I did I supose they would be yelling at me for not fainting or screaming as they ravaged me.

 

[Mugzie69]

Perhaps Several Daughters...

...form a pact to see which girl can seduce one of her friend's Dad first. You know how manipulative young girls can be!

Rules can be framed to make the dynamics interesting. Although the girls compete, they must also cooperate fully to help each other. They all want experience, right? So in order to participate, each girl shares what she knows about her Dad's interests, weaknesses, etc. If one Dad has ever observed that this or that girl is pretty, smart or otherwise impressive, this is shared. SHE becomes the girl who tries to seduce that father. The point here is to stack everything AGAINST the Dads.

As further motivation for full co-operation, the girls agree that beyond the seduction of one Dad is the larger objective to see which girl can seduce most Dads. One daughter might complain to her Dad that this or that girl is so pretty or so shapely, thereby drawing attention to her physical attributes, and obliging him affirm what she is saying. If one Dad has two daughters, they might stage a conversation between themselves on this with interesting effect. When one Dad shows signs on weakening this is shared with the others, who exchange ideas to refine and redouble efforts.

Of course this story will not be told well in several pages. But it does lend itself to an high level of interaction between participating girls as they share what they did, what worked in each case, etc.

Oh yes! By any chance, is the pastor there with his daughter?

Mugz

 

[Fantasies_only]

Of course this story will not be told well in several pages. But it does lend itself to an high level of interaction between participating girls as they share what they did, what worked in each case, etc.

Oh yes! By any chance, is the pastor there with his daughter?

Mugz

I'm glad you recognize that.
I was about to say that's a good storyline for somewhere near the middle of the story, not the beginning.

The entire point of the ball is to keep the daughter's virginity confined to family members (I mean to be abstinent outside of the family), thus making this an insest story.
The seduction story may come later, as her stepmother wants to keep her husband from straying.
He happens to have a fetish for young (but legal) teens, so they all try to seduce him testing his ability to resist all the girls.

 

[Fantasies_only]

Hey gwen_writes, how's it going?
I PMed an example if you're stuck.

 

[Reshbod]

The entire point of the ball is to keep the daughter's virginity confined to family members (I mean to be abstinent outside of the family), thus making this an insest story.

I agree. While these ideas are interesting and could make for good followups, the core of the story, in my opinion, is the father/daughter romance/seduction. If too much is put in and the things get too unbelievable, it takes me out of the story. Once the basic elements of the story are completed, then in any followups, one push it into any direction they wish, in my opinion.

I'm still trying to get something put together but am finding it difficult to tie the various scenes together.

 

[AugustineV]

Anyone ever attempt this storyline?

 

[Jagged]

Those events are creepy enough you don't even need to do incest. 18yo girl's passionate rebellion with a boy afterward. Maybe thinking about the pledge and torn between approval and desire. Losing ones virginity is still a hell of a story.

 

[Black_Dahlia]

It could be that the family has just moved to a new town and the parents join the local church, where they find out about these purity pledges. So the Dad tells his daughter that he wants her to pledge her purity at the next Purity Ball. Unknown to him, of course, she is already far from pure, having spread her legs for more than one horny lad back in their old town. Rather than tell her Dad that she's no longer a virgin, she goes along with it. However, she's blessed with the body of a porn star and this doesn't go unnoticed by all the other Dads at the ball. Turned on by the way all these older guys are staring at her, she soon finds herself in the back alley, her panties down around her ankles, bent over some garbage cans, letting one Dad after another sample her slutty delights.

 

[Reshbod]

Anyone ever attempt this storyline?

I have a partially written draft of the story in my files. Honestly the topic does give me that icky feeling, so I put it away for a while. Now that this thread was revived, I may pull it back out and try to finish it when time permits.

Again, if anyone wants to PM me or reply here with ideas or suggestions, I'd be glad to get them.

 

[LindsayRae]

Wow. Here's an old classic. Hey, does this mean FO has finally left us??

 

[JRaven]

Wow. Here's an old classic. Hey, does this mean FO has finally left us??

It's last post was 11/23/09. We can only hope it doesn't come back!

 

[JRaven]

It happens with a lot of great ideas, they just are forgotten and never heard of (unless someone revives an old thread or uses an idea after all).

Seems DarkBee had it right three years ago.

I have a partially written draft of the story in my files. Honestly the topic does give me that icky feeling, so I put it away for a while. Now that this thread was revived, I may pull it back out and try to finish it when time permits.

Again, if anyone wants to PM me or reply here with ideas or suggestions, I'd be glad to get them.

See Augustine? There's still some hope on getting the story. To be honest, I'm guilty of taking off with an idea and poof! I'm not interested in it any more or just too lazy to finish an edit.

Jenny

 

[MiriamL]

The entire point of the ball is to keep the daughter's virginity confined to family members, thus making this an incest story.

Interesting thread...yes, the daughter pledges her purity to her father, her future husband and to her creator.

This would work as an incest story only if a great deal of subtlety is applied...a story which takes place only in the daughter's mind.

Psychologically, what she is really doing is offering her body and soul to her dad and becoming his woman...until he gives her away to another man under God's law in marriage.

So you can see how this would develop into a fantasy as her sexuality unfolds.

http://i42.tinypic.com/2mewd5g.jpg

 

[Reshbod]

I currently am working on two versions of this story. The first is a father/daughter story, the second is minus the incest element.