Hi everyone.
I have already posted four chapters of another series and I thought it was time to try something new. This idea popped in my head and I began this story.
http://www.literotica.com/s/on-the-run-4
It's about a transgendered son who runs away with his/her mother after a terrible event with the abusive father.
Now, that other series I have written contained incest as well, but seeing as this is a new one part story (at least for now) and I'm currently in the proces of writing a sister-sister incest story I would like some feedback.
I have already received a few comments saying that it was pretty good and one person send me an e-mail and told me he/she liked it, but that I sometimes used the same words too much.
Now I wanted to ask you guys what you think about my story. What could be better? What should I pay attention too in my next story?
If you have some tips and tricks to improve my writing, they would be much appreciated
Thanks.
I have already posted four chapters of another series and I thought it was time to try something new. This idea popped in my head and I began this story.
http://www.literotica.com/s/on-the-run-4
It's about a transgendered son who runs away with his/her mother after a terrible event with the abusive father.
Now, that other series I have written contained incest as well, but seeing as this is a new one part story (at least for now) and I'm currently in the proces of writing a sister-sister incest story I would like some feedback.
I have already received a few comments saying that it was pretty good and one person send me an e-mail and told me he/she liked it, but that I sometimes used the same words too much.
Now I wanted to ask you guys what you think about my story. What could be better? What should I pay attention too in my next story?
If you have some tips and tricks to improve my writing, they would be much appreciated
Thanks.
