mimicox777
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Hi! I am a new author and I was really hoping to get some feedback on my story. Could anyone help me out? I would greatly appreciate it!
Please Help!!!
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mimicox777
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Story
Yes, I have already written it. But I have not gotten much feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/s/and-still-i-dream
Yes, I have already written it. But I have not gotten much feedback.
http://www.literotica.com/s/and-still-i-dream
mimicox777
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Nice.
Thank you. But most of the feedback is congratulations. I would like to get feedback that is more about the story itself. Do you know what I mean?
Thank you. But most of the feedback is congratulations. I would like to get feedback that is more about the story itself. Do you know what I mean?
sr71plt
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This is not a read and required to comment/help develop Web site. This is a read and have fun Web site. If you want useful help with your writing development, you should go to someone trained to give it. There's no particular reason for you to believe comments on writing development with no clue on the credentials those giving the comments have anyway.
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LettersFromTatyana
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You might have better luck in the story feedback forum. At least, that seems to be where people ask for feedback.
Make sure you include a link to your story in your post.
Make sure you include a link to your story in your post.
PennLady
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LfT is right; posting on the "Story Feedback" forum, with a link, will be more likely to get you feedback. You can also put a note before or after your story asking people to leave their thoughts or criticisms. But beware, people aren't always nice about that.
SR71 is also right. Not everyone who reads here really cares about certain quality issues as long as their criteria are met, whatever the criteria might be. Some people, like me, are prone to leaving feedback, or sending it, but generally speaking, few people vote and even fewer leave comments of any kind.
SR71 is also right. Not everyone who reads here really cares about certain quality issues as long as their criteria are met, whatever the criteria might be. Some people, like me, are prone to leaving feedback, or sending it, but generally speaking, few people vote and even fewer leave comments of any kind.
